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Betrayal

Betrayal is a coward's blade
That makes a heart its sheath
A toxic brew of malice and deceit
Poisons love, birthing grief
From lying eyes and poisoned lips
With caressing razor fingertips
Friendship dies.

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On Monday March 31st, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1843) writes:

Great wording. Great write

On Monday March 24th, 2008, Hello Dead Kitty (73) writes:

a very appropriate sketching of what betrayal is....great job!

On Friday March 14th, 2008, An Expired Member (10) writes:

awh :[ this made me sad "A toxic brew of malice and deceit" - really good choice of words, i must say :D

On Friday March 14th, 2008, ReddropX (42) writes:

Wow, I just felt this only a few moments ago and you've expressed it beautifully.

On Monday March 10th, 2008, saintedmad (1156) writes:

classicism and some machinations of betrayal; loverly and succinct [and does remind me of all that toil and trouble and bubble brewing macbeth. ..very classical indeed] welcome and stay~ness

On Monday March 10th, 2008, evolve (2232) writes:

Fantastically driven and a damn excellent manipulation of language. This conveyed your message with a brutal sting. Well done, indeed.

On Monday March 10th, 2008, Sketso (546) writes:

Nice, shortly, spoken... with a final line that implodes the mind. I'm looking forward to more from you.

On Monday March 10th, 2008, carlosjackal (1647) writes:

Fantastically wrought piece and a great opener to your account..Welcome indeed! =) -Carl

On Monday March 10th, 2008, carlosjackal (1647) writes:

P.S. I really dig the thought you've put into your profile front page :)

On Monday March 10th, 2008, Tinuviel (72) writes:

Thank you all for the kind comments. I feel welcome indeed. ^_^

On Monday March 10th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1843) writes:

With the people who commented you. You should.

On Monday March 10th, 2008, Geisha (772) writes:

Mmmhmm,*Welcome to DP

On Monday March 10th, 2008, tangeled (538) writes:

fuckin friends man. nice write. ~ta

On Monday March 10th, 2008, blue (1754) writes:

yup.

On Monday March 10th, 2008, Drea (937) writes:

7 lines that wrap up something I've been feeling laterly. I enjoyed this one. Welcome to DP.

On Monday March 10th, 2008, Alanarchy (1616) writes:

There's nothing quite like getting stabbed in the back by someone you thought you could trust. Refreshing, huh. Great write. Very vividly captures the feeling. Welcome to DP.

On Monday March 10th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1843) writes:

damn. Not far from what I have felt myself

On Monday March 10th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1843) writes:

Ah yes! wellcome to DP

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