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There is ever a ghost in all my shadows;
Some cryptic, primordial entity
With scabbed-over skin scraped
Along the pavement of youth;
Mummified in bits of silk and remorse,
Cauterizing the visceral ebb of numb
And blanket of oblivious delirium
With ribbons and sinews of regret;
Some insipid spirit of the trite status quo
That rouses me from my daydreams;
A wraith for the reckless at heart
Eyes blind with filmy cataracts of loss,
Seeing only caution thrown to the wind,
And gathering back the bloodied pieces
With clawed and netted hands
To leave lamenting on my doorstep
Before strangling my dreams in their sleep.
There is ever a ghost in all my shadows
There is always doubt in every step.




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On Monday April 7th, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:
great use of language, however I feel the flow is slightly hampered by the lack of "full stops" - makes the line breaking a touch 'stoic' which I feel stunts the poem's character ..just a wee bit mind you (I must have read about 20 poems and this was the only one I felt I could extend a comment for)...a ghostly, otherwordly presence, this poem ripples with elegiac thought, bathed in the shadow's conscience...just the flow that's a little 'stiff' for me, aside from that...a worthwhile and enjoyable read


On Saturday April 5th, 2008, Fantecstasy (85) writes:
A powerful reflection... on the strange and the grotesque, but also very lovely. *tips hat*



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