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Over margaritas
he watches her grow up.

She sheds her winter coat
and orders her drink
without hesitation.

On the rocks.
Salted glass.

Talk passes time

Smiles are for charming.

She drains her glass neatly.
Licks the salt from the rim.

Leaves him with
a blown goodbye kiss

through a window traced
in the latticework of frost.




This is way starker than my usual writing style... But i went out for drinks after work with a very old friend who made a comment along the lines of me "finally being able to deal with being grown up." Valid. The whole incident inspired this.



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On Wednesday November 12th, 2008, allenthepope (8) writes:
what does "starker" mean?


On Sunday March 2nd, 2008, Reefer_rave (220) writes:
I agree with everyone so far... sad but sweet.. a perfect snapshot. Makes me want something shaken not stirred..


On Saturday March 1st, 2008, Alanarchy (1697) writes:
Reminds me of something from Minus the Bear. Felt melancholly to me, for some reason. Sweet, sure. But there was something sad in the end. "through a woindow traced in the latticework of frost." beautiful. Write on.


On Friday February 29th, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:
sweet moments are these! everything is better over margaritas... nice capture, like a snapshot.. *smiles*


On Friday February 29th, 2008, Endifference (258) writes:
my sentiments, the same. -END



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