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i wanted to write you something today
with stolen words
and feelings from another
with an exaggeration
of my emotion
and how my heart sighs
when it hears your name

but i didnt want to be think
i didnt want to be true
i didnt want to sound like
all the fake sonnets
that remind me
of how i felt

i wanted to write you something today
something copied,
plagiarized
with big rounded letters
something i couldn't create
to express how you make me feel
when the truth is uncovered

but i didnt want to seem like i cared
i didnt want to be honest
i didnt want to be like
the other pirates
who use the words of others
to express their would-be-feelings

i wanted to write you something today
on your skin
with simple slits
in blood
with bruise marks
to cover where i broke your heart
because sometimes i do that

but i didnt want to use to my own words
i didnt want to repeat myself
i didnt want you to think i cared
i didn't think about it too much
so i decided to be simple
and say it like this...

.....Fake




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On Wednesday August 13th, 2008, Nixx (168) writes:
i like this better than some of the repedative bullshit i hear sometimes. thank you. this was good.


On Saturday April 12th, 2008, Riddles Moon (637) writes:
I can't think of a single thing to say except FAVORITE!


On Friday April 11th, 2008, Marionette Mars (504) writes:
i know how this feels. i defitniely know how this feels. you took this out of my head didn't you! great awesome write. -mars


On Monday March 3rd, 2008, Geisha (754) writes:
*breaks*


On Wednesday February 27th, 2008, Trigger (124) writes:
The messege in this is so potent and clear, and like Ruby said, not too dramatic. I love the feel of this, it's almost turbulent. Great write, Phoenix, please keep it up. -Trigger


On Wednesday February 27th, 2008, RubyXero (460) writes:
wow. that was nicely told. and i liked the transition...from writing something with words...to cutting it with blades and effecting your heart. great ending too. this was a really well written piece...you got the point across without being excessively dramatic about it. nice job


On Wednesday February 27th, 2008, Phoenix (11) writes:
Just a note to the original author "ashrain" http://www.darkpoetry.com/dp/1854/85912. I wrote this because of an ex, she says she wrote this 6 months ago, but seeing how long ago you wrote it, clearly it is your own work, it is beautiful by the way, if only it were for me.


On Wednesday February 27th, 2008, Skarlet Rebell Queen (209) writes:
this was originally fake.. wonderful



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