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The Daily Special

Never really sure of his own personal preference

but never the less

left
completely famished

What kind
of state of mind
would put you in an endless hunger?

I'm thinking
it's ego based

relying consistently
on the reactions of others
and having little to do with what fills the space inside

besides

you can never feel satisfied
with a full belly

and an empty heart

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On Wednesday August 20th, 2008, fallen (275) writes:

I love the cleverly delivered contrast in the end. Also, something most can relate to.

On Thursday July 10th, 2008, After hours (636) writes:

I hear what skets is saying , yet for me it's the conrolled hammer that drives it home for me...very well spoken

On Thursday July 10th, 2008, Lipstick Whore (495) writes:

Thought provoking and wonderfully well written. Bravo!

On Thursday July 10th, 2008, Sketso (626) writes:

dunno if I like the sledgehammer that rides behind these words... so close to home, for many, I would assume. It takes a steady hand to challenge the reader, each reader, directly, but in this, you have done just that.

On Thursday July 10th, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (545) writes:

thats true :D i like this piece, truthful and well written, pierces hearts -symph-

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