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"Paper Gown Suicide" by the-rapist

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Every attempt made,
to eliminate all possible means,
to a self imposed end.

However-

he will prove them all wrong,
and curse the spirit sucking world,
for which he has known.

He will overcome all obstacles.

He will transcend.

Senseless-
to all those who care,
or display feigned sensitivity,
with their overcast stare.

Transparent empathy,
 
is far more destructive than anyone ever imagined.

Creative,
gum wrapper-like,
intertwined creation...

sets the lethal foundation.


It's the last imposition he will ever place upon his loved ones.

Despite his incarceration-

never again,
will anyone doubt his savvy determination.

Hanging from the ceiling,
like a cheap Christmas tree decoration.






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On Friday April 11th, 2008, colorapathy (63) writes:
the ending of this was very interesting and abrupt, rather strong. I like that part the best. I wandered just a little bit in the begining, but it pulled me back in firmly for that last bit.


On Sunday March 16th, 2008, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:
I adored the last two lines. This was a very abrupt and had such a true-life feel to it. Very well done. Thank you for sharing.


On Saturday February 23rd, 2008, An Expired Member (8) writes:
I love this one, its really good. Thank you for the comment.


On Saturday February 23rd, 2008, the-rapist (362) writes:
in my thoughts he created the gum wrapper like twist, with his paper gown. I suppose a bit more sunlight and some human contact this weekend would help. lol


On Saturday February 23rd, 2008, Ainsof (1729) writes:
not sure I followed this one close enough, but I got the idea he's hung himself in jail; but I'm not sure I understand the paper gown or the rage. I like the concluding image a lot though. Oh Okay... the gum wrappers were the means. OOP. Lil slow on the uptake there, sorry. I like the prop about empathy in the middle, too. A very opaque narrative and an intriguing event at that!


On Saturday February 23rd, 2008, RubyXero (489) writes:
hmmm...oh yes. i loved the whole, "spirit sucking world"... how very true.


On Saturday February 23rd, 2008, the-rapist (362) writes:
tnx


On Friday February 22nd, 2008, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:
p.e.r.f.e.c.t..... for lack of better words, here is some shameless flattery.



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