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After Rapture (For all of you believers)

So I said the Lords name!

Beat me, stab me,
Stomp me, shoot me,
Please,
Make me bleed.

Run me over
And do it again,
Engulf me in flames,
As if i've lived in sin.

Stone me,
And spit in my face,
Crucify me,
For I am a disgrace.

Torture me,
And whip me,
Blind me,
So I may not see.

If this is the punishment
I have to take,
Then so be it,
Because my Lord is no mistake.

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On Thursday February 28th, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (545) writes:

excellent dude, i dig the rage in this, i can feel the passion in each line, another good one -symph-

On Thursday February 28th, 2008, Alanarchy (1697) writes:

Dig the confidence that shines along with the words. This is great man. Welcome to DP.

On Thursday February 28th, 2008, Blood_Wing (10) writes:

You guys are great

On Wednesday February 27th, 2008, RubyXero (448) writes:

hehe. reminds me of growing up mormon... bad bad! don't say the lords name in vain. GRRRR! and then the lectures come. i totally understand so i only have one thing to say. JESUS CHRIST! oh my fucking god! :) there...i feel better.

On Tuesday February 26th, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:

I figured god was a sadist... those crusaders had right all along, that dominance shit ain't no joke... or maybe all of the believers are just masochists... really, it is hard to tell. brutal words. Thanks!

On Tuesday February 26th, 2008, GraveFlower (380) writes:

....mmmm,,,,,,this turns me on.....good write.. a lot of emotion, i can imagine it, that doesnt come to often, ..once agian,,,welcome

On Tuesday February 26th, 2008, Circe Avalon (179) writes:

very good. My step sister used to gasp every time I took the lords name in vain, and I think that I just did it for fun....I was so cute when I was 9. Anyways, very good work. loved it.

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