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.little boy.

~ Mars ~

he's just a little boy
but he knows far more
than little boys should know
about love

he says that love is
what you feel in your heart
(he points to his heart)

he says that love makes you smile
when you hear her name
(he softly says mine and smiles)

he says that love
is the twinkle in your eye
when you look in the mirror
and think of her
(he closed one eye)

"can you see my twinkle?", he said.
i could see quite the twinkle
in his perfect green eyes

i asked,
"little boy, who are you in love with?"

the little boy took my hand and said,
"you mars, i love you."





he's not a little boy anymore. he's the love of my life.

© 2008 Marcia D. Suarez
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  • Chunky On Thursday, June 19, 2008, Chunky (50) wrote:

    thats really cute girl. i like the endings in parenthesis. this was really cute. i liked it a lot.

  • Chaos God On Thursday, June 12, 2008, Chaos God (116) wrote:

    Lucky Be Though He Is, This Ones Just... Wayy Too Sweet For My Maw. Ick.

  • Mars On Friday, June 13, 2008, Mars (717) wrote:

    sorry darling.

  • Miss Dahlia On Monday, June 9, 2008, Miss Dahlia (209) wrote:

    awwwwh. love it.

  • Mars On Tuesday, June 10, 2008, Mars (717) wrote:

    thanks :D

  • NikesRain On Monday, June 9, 2008, NikesRain (1215) wrote:

    cherished memories to hold close... thanks for sharing this.. lovely

  • Mars On Monday, June 9, 2008, Mars (717) wrote:

    anytime :D

  • MoonishBunny On Monday, June 9, 2008, MoonishBunny (720) wrote:

    oh thats so sweet! i think im gonna cry! awww!

  • Mars On Monday, June 9, 2008, Mars (717) wrote:

    thanks :D i tried to make it sweet. don't cry! *hands tissue*

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Monday, June 9, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (693) wrote:

    Quite the lucky little boy, an excellent piece Mars. A perfect thought for me at the moment

  • Mars On Tuesday, June 10, 2008, Mars (717) wrote:

    he's the love of my life :D i'll love him forever


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