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i don't want you to die
i don't ever want to loose you
you're so precious
i'd rather die than let you
you deserve your second chance
please take my first
tie it to your finger
so you won't forget
that when you pull the trigger
my decision i won't regret.



this is for my cousin Renzo (also my godbrother)
he's on the edge of dying because he overdoses on drugs. he's an addict and they are now putting him in rehab this monday. i feel terrible. and i love him with my heart. thinking about him dying will be the worst thing ever.



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On Saturday May 3rd, 2008, Aleas (135) writes:
Best wishes, Poison. Be very sure to let your cousin know exactly how you feel. It may seem trivial to tell someone that, but he's going to need everything he can get from those who love him for a very difficult road ahead.


On Sunday May 4th, 2008, Miss Mars (380) writes:
thanks. i tried to too. he's a little stubborn and he still doesn't see that they're putting him there becasue of his misuse of drugs and he was really high yesterday during his sister's confirmation. its the fact that he doesn't give a shit that really has me. but i'm sure he'll learn in time that he's throwing his life away. thanks so much though.


On Friday May 2nd, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (377) writes:
Painful Mars... I'm sorry about all this, hopefully things get better


On Friday May 2nd, 2008, Fallen Moon (554) writes:
ditto



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