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"((confused))" by Miss Mars

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Piano keys that play by themselves
Candle light dinners
Velvet touches in the moonlight
Slowly lips tangle
Bodies entwine
Under the candlelight.
Two bodies shine

Dungeons flaming with fire
Shackles on the nearby walls
Spiraling downward
The only way I’ve ever known
Staircase shifting
Up and
       D
         O
            W
N
Right and tfel
Around and around
Like a wheel that won’t STOP
Never ending confusion
Caressing my skin

A labyrinth
In the grass
Twists and turns
Sharp knifes at the sides
Feeling empty
Having a slight drink
From the chalice of pain
Breaking apart
S-L-O-W-L-Y

Crystal ball
Shining in the darkness.
In the dim light of the house
The clouds
Feel wet.
So soft dragging the unconscious
thoughts out of me
and I feel light.
Getting held together tight


Feeling relaxed.
For the first time in years





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On Tuesday April 15th, 2008, Fallen Moon (554) writes:
^_^ i likes this. so much done, so much felt. *closes eye* now if only i could find a place like that....


On Tuesday April 15th, 2008, Blood_Wing (15) writes:
Yet another great write. Fucking awesome!


On Tuesday April 15th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (377) writes:
Wow kitty, this was really good :) I like the word arrangements and images. It feels good to be relaxed...


On Tuesday April 15th, 2008, Zophiel (356) writes:
An engaging read. In my interpretation it had a slow pace that contrasted well with some of the more forceful imagery.


On Tuesday April 15th, 2008, Miss Mars (380) writes:
thanks. sorry i made it slow....


On Tuesday April 15th, 2008, Zophiel (356) writes:
It was not a criticism. Just an interpretation.



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