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Melodic Rifts
Transgress
Sift
And Shift
Into a lover I call my own.
With his strength, I never digress.

He enables me to progress and tread rivers and streams
So confidently even if it seems
As though chaos is haunting me
And I can’t escape
He makes my knees quake
Whenever I hear that bass

My heart aches

When I feel that powerful beat
Permeate through my soul.
Soft enough to seep in
Yet sharp enough to penetrate
My very being
With such ferocity

I will never let go…

Such sweet pain
The forbidden paradox
Without him I am lost
His interludes intoxicate and infiltrate the
Mind
Body
Soul

The Perfect Paradigm
For he is the true mastermind to this
Beautiful blasphemy.

He is the sweet nothings in my ear
Everything he says is a term of endearment.
With him by my side
I never fear.

For he is the Motivator
The Originator
Innovator
The Ultimate Creator
The Aid to my Abettor
I will forever
Be indebted and enslaved to his lyrical usury.
Oh, the aesthetic insanity

Unlike men of flesh and blood,
His physical attributes are nonexistent
He is transparent
An open book
He is not one to play foolish games.

Lustful twilights do not lace his eyes
Only sincerity
The true piety

His concerns are beyond
Rims
Timbs
And Women
He is the messenger of truth and honesty.
He would not have it any other way

My admiration for him is infinite with a love unnamed
No one can tame the passion I possess
For the melodic rifts that I have
Manifested into a real man.

Although he doesn’t breathe
He lives through me
And anyone else who places their ear to a speaker box
(How unorthodox)
Oxygen may not fill his lungs
But his etudes are exceptional substitutes.
Most absolute, music shall forever be my love

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