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(Note: Try not to judge this one too harshly... I wrote it more than ten years ago, when I was still a very young high school dropout.)
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Deadly poison seeps in skin,
Toxic venom deep within;
Reaking havoc on your senses,
Poison spreading, blood condenses.

Body and soul, so dizzy, uneven,
Stomach twisting while dry-heaving;
Killer pain inside your head,
Designated to your bed.

Ice-cold sweat and boiling fever,
Rooms keeps spining 'round forever;
Skin ash-grey, eyes bright blue,
Devil's number all through you.

Coughing, hacking... mind distracts,
Read Last Rights, no turning back;
Thoughts cloud up, pain force-fed,
Mind goes black, now you're dead.



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On Thursday April 10th, 2008, deadrosesrdust (142) writes:
reminds of a trully heinous hangover. coincidentally one from 10 years ago.ahhh the memories. ive learned never to get that drunk again. apparently u had a knack for the writing bug then too.


On Wednesday April 9th, 2008, RubyXero (487) writes:
nice. pretty creative rhyming words. i liked it...even for 10 years ago. ;)


On Sunday January 20th, 2008, Mab (1095) writes:
wicked rhyming..very dark and descriptive.


On Saturday January 12th, 2008, An Expired Member (19) writes:
I thought this was very well done. Great work. I know it must be hard to be a writer.



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