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Mist and White Shores....

the space in wich i travel.....

open...
grant me...

Mists of Avalon....

grey mists of uncertainty.... i cannot go back...

with my "first"sadness i wait...

strong undercurrent/ placid and tranquil bay.....

measure my soul...tainted and tried.....no wrong or right.......

unveil my golden heart......let me pass grey veil.....Grey Mists of Avalon.

reveal my regret and my trusting ignorance....and inbred humility...

Your White Shores call in dreams....

deny passage,
revolk meaning,

i wait
your silence
i listen
to all
to you
to mother earth
your void

for passage....

bless you...
bless your time...
bless the veil that covers your secrets...

i wait with all grace and adoration....

let your uplifted and divine glance cross my travel this nite...

Avalon

I belive...
I yearn...

Gentle Hands deliver direction....
the compass heart i have seen.....glorius

this nite, this still water, this mist before me.....

Except me into your fabled and most revered dream........

ps. may faith find this traveller....

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On Thursday April 12th, 2007, Dark Moon (9) writes:

I will except you into my fabled andmost revered dream. I love this so much....I feel the same at times.

On Sunday February 4th, 2007, GreyDividing (194) writes:

Erily haunting, like old campfire stories still lingering in mind come breakfast. You're a cool cat, man. Nicely done.

On Thursday December 28th, 2006, Spiritus_Frumenti (361) writes:

what a spiritual and gracious piece this was...it was earthly and compassionate...it certainly felt like a mist reading this...awesome...-l-

On Tuesday December 19th, 2006, K_Love (688) writes:

Every word entrances me, beautifully written, like pieces coming together like a puzzle so wonderfully.

On Thursday December 14th, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (106) writes:

lured....and AH...... utterly beautiful once again

On Saturday December 9th, 2006, flying_fox (769) writes:

This lulled me as i read the words, it brought me to an almost meditative state. Wonderful. PS: I know this is totally irrelevant, but you have the most beautifully arresting face.

On Tuesday November 21st, 2006, Instant Insanity (745) writes:

Simply beautiful. Bursting with elquenze. Nicely written :-) ][ ][

On Monday November 20th, 2006, NikesRain (1421) writes:

beautiful eloquence.... flowing and effecting.... a gentle heart pulling yearning mayhaps asking.... throws one into a wonderful quiet drifting... so lovely

On Monday November 20th, 2006, NikesRain (1421) writes:

i have to add i read this carefully, and in its beauty it also gave a quite tone of longing and a hint of melancholy but that's only for me.. it's still lovely all the same

On Monday November 20th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

Oh my GOD! I felt like I was in a dream within a dream urban. Surreal and so eloquent. It gave me chills along my spine, and my legs. "I believe I yearn"... beautiful hun! Well done my friend..... Julia~

On Sunday November 19th, 2006, Grim_Sorrow (87) writes:

not big on the religious aspect, but who am i to hinder an otherwise brilliant work. well done

On Sunday November 19th, 2006, mozarts cat (270) writes:

this was so gracefully spoken .. took me to another place .. absolutely beautiful

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