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where are you...

Where are you....?

Where are you in that house...?

i want to know the place where my happiness is....and my salvation...

is it in a person...? or in the maze of my heart...?

finding and sadness calm my being...
for so long this question pervades me......,

i belive to answer it now.....with a soft whisper to my soul.....

with the dizzyness of a tumble.....i reach and reach again.....

grasping at false hopes and memories......

i cry...
i ask....

where are you............................. .............................?

ps. you are on a grassy knoll underneath your willow tree with the sun-a-shining

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On Thursday April 12th, 2007, Dark Moon (9) writes:

Sadness comes to me at first....and then the end hits you with the love you've been searching for. Well done!

On Wednesday January 17th, 2007, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

This is so intense...and dominating. I love it, and the ending adds a softeness that makes me smile.

On Saturday August 12th, 2006, An Expired Member (45) writes:

I like this poem. It's a beautiful poem. You're alo a very good writer.

On Sunday July 30th, 2006, veingo (589) writes:

"with the sun-a-shining" Such a cleansing finish. It brings a content feeling. Nice. ^V^

On Sunday June 25th, 2006, gbuff69 (212) writes:

I love willow trees the best. and your poetry.

On Sunday June 25th, 2006, Ainsof (1838) writes:

donde.... I see the expression of the supplement here... the completion plea, and the desire for a true answer, the longing to leave the question, the search behind for the contentment of just one answer... nice!

On Sunday June 25th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (507) writes:

a beautifully broken moment, the haunting echo of that question.. I wonder if we will ever hear an answer to it that is completely acceptable and lasting.

On Saturday April 15th, 2006, mywristshurt (524) writes:

this was an amazing write.. To no know at all of where anything is, confused.. its a fantastic one.. A+

On Saturday April 8th, 2006, Aurora_Light (573) writes:

the ps. note made me smile in a time when smiles are rare. this work hit aprat of me that I had thought I had hidden away, thank you for showing me the path back to it

On Saturday March 25th, 2006, sIo (892) writes:

this is soft and gorgeous...makes me smile with warmth ;)

On Wednesday March 22nd, 2006, Mr King (623) writes:

I wish you all of the peace of the ps and more... Always, Seth

On Thursday March 16th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

Reading this again...It again, just grabs a hold of my heart in such a way, I can't find words to explain it. Still beautiful dear. *fluttering wings*

On Sunday March 12th, 2006, manywalks (950) writes:

Hazy, soft and assuring, like the feel and fit of this. ~ wen

On Wednesday March 8th, 2006, Ice Dragoness (18) writes:

I wish knew where my happiness and salvation were too.. your writing has always astounded me

On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, evolve (2229) writes:

Compelling, the contrast portrayed here.. yet identical intensity seperates the last line from the rest. I saw this as dreamy and seeking..amazing. Thank you. I needed this feeling.

On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

My words here would not give this justice. You are beautiful! Julia~

On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, NikesRain (1474) writes:

lovely and calling... like a deep summer breeze flowing so softly in the late afternoon sun... thank you for the smile this brought...wonderful *skips off to find her own willow tree*

On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, Ainsof (1838) writes:

tender beyond ephemeral...that last line made me think of fig trees and nirvana...very pleasant image whispered sincerely

On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:

such a soft hesitance, alit with prose and elegant speech..your thoughts are simply alit with art in each word. and i just adore the last line. it gave me gorgeous image to end with. simply stunning job.

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