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my mind is numb...

no longer do i wield the strenth that i had...

my visions of grandure are fading into melencholy....

my grasp of love is becoming less articulate......

my wise words are are becoming more rather than less......

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I Must belive.......

I Will practice dicipline, and therfore gain strenth...

I Will dream of my "First Self" and I will see again...

I Will love myself, there fore i will be able to love others..

I will gain my wisdome ...........by being born again....

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On Tuesday February 14th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

How is it that one can touch me in a different way, with each write, but still touch me in the same spot? Your soul is boundless, as is your talent. You are beautiful. Julia~

On Sunday February 20th, 2005, ElegantKiss (401) writes:

This reminded me of Pantera. "I'm born again.. becoming godsize!" Oooh, nice write.

On Friday February 18th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1245) writes:

words of wisdom...nicely done

On Saturday February 5th, 2005, Mr King (623) writes:

happy we are, to read this... 1LOVE ALWAYS, Seth & Trish

On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, Jonas (867) writes:

change burns like ultra-violet radiation can't see it can't touch it but it burns your skin palpably as it peels through old layers and itch and sting and peel and new skin pokes through. much love, mr. humility.

On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

I've had these similar thoughts inside my head ..specially the "being reborn" line ...very existential and thoughtful ..again, you make poetry alive.

On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, frozen (748) writes:

great write

On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, AniDayz (1281) writes:

very nicely done. full of inner strength and inner wisdom...*inspiring*

On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, lordshadow (215) writes:

It's poets like you that make me like this site again... in between all of the nonsensical bullshit, you remind me that talent is still alive.

On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, DoctorAsh (506) writes:

:::turns into a bridge:::

On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, Northstar (455) writes:

I understand what it is like to feel these elements of oneself slip away into the night, and what a challenge it is to reclaim them--this is quite well expressed

On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, VenomPlease (180) writes:

I like. Sort of like a code of honor... type of thing. Great work

On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, sIo (892) writes:

this was just crazy awesome. many words of lessons learned bleed from this piece.

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