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Mother of My Dreams

I am close to you.

The draining thought of Time.

I am close to you.

You are the Mother of my Dreams;
You created me when Time began.

You are close to me.
As only a Mother would.

I belive that I am born within
Your sleep.

I am an adult in your meaning.

I am close to you.

So very close..........................

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On Monday November 6th, 2006, wicked flesh (32) writes:

How do I find the words to describe the beauty portrayed here?

On Monday February 13th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

Very close.....

On Tuesday May 31st, 2005, Full blame (33) writes:

this is a marvelous idea. your brevity aids in its delivery. I will definently remember this one

On Wednesday March 2nd, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:

your writings always seem so beautiful and pure... i envy your abilities ~kristy

On Sunday January 2nd, 2005, An Expired Member (9) writes:

I love this, it is very spiritual x maddy x

On Friday December 31st, 2004, sIo (883) writes:

oh wow, this is once again very sad but elligant. flows beautifully and portrays the meaning of time as our mothers incredibly.

On Monday July 26th, 2004, sixsixnine (567) writes:

this piece so beautiful.. i feel some strange peace after reading.. it made me happy to try singing*

On Wednesday October 8th, 2003, Silver Spectre (90) writes:

very beatiful and yet so distant it seems from the tangible... ~Silver~

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, An Expired Member (22) writes:

its so beautiful. if fits nicely together.

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

Its nice emotional type writing. You can almost feel the intimacy between the mother and daughter..-Kefka

On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (23) writes:

This was so full of greatness and WOW. i wish i had the wonderful words to put down how i feel about this. as liquid put ..."i am born within your sleep" i loved that . so so so great.

On Thursday July 24th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

A dream within a dream. While I read this my mind journeys to the very edge of our existence. I see a figure in the distance growing closer. It is myself, looking out into forever.

On Thursday June 12th, 2003, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:

There are so many angles from which to view this... but anyway you see it, it is without a doubt a supremely beautiful piece. Well done.

On Tuesday April 29th, 2003, DoctorAsh (506) writes:

beautiful .. such a wonderful thought ... if only

On Monday May 12th, 2003, celestine_moon (53) writes:

By far my favorite of your works. Love them all. Great imagery.

On Monday April 28th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

Very nice work!!!

On Monday April 28th, 2003, SilentAssassin (39) writes:

Very nice. Great Job!

On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (32) writes:

A very neglectant maternal feel for it..like a strong love in small barely apt doses..and yet it puts me at ease..

On Tuesday March 4th, 2003, Jonas (878) writes:

the poem makes me feel like when you're in your blankents... many of them, but a draft persists through all and you lose sleep to the cold.

On Tuesday March 18th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

oh nice explination, My Fishy!!

On Thursday February 20th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

I am born within your sleep... nice one.

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