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without......

i am without.........

there is a void i cannot name

there is a man i was.....

i am entrapped......with all my intelligence.....and failing wisdom.....

there my "will",......forgotten.

i must fathom this deepness....

i must breech this dreamlike wall.....

i must see my reflection in the lazy stream i lay by.....

i am without......

i must reach within.....

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On Sunday May 7th, 2006, Err0r (571) writes:

The ending really sent this one out with a powerful understanding. I like how things wrap up nicely at the end. :)

On Monday February 27th, 2006, NikesRain (1421) writes:

failing wisdom i think not but that it shines here within these flowing intense lines so aptly and deeply put... wonderful

On Tuesday February 14th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

God, I have no words.

On Monday April 4th, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:

concise and powerful...this speaks volumes ~kristy

On Friday March 4th, 2005, steuss (144) writes:

This whole piece is so complete. I get the sense of loss with each line, without... each line is without something intangible, but that makes it full of meaning and beauty (in words at least) well done!

On Friday December 31st, 2004, sIo (884) writes:

blue's got the right words here, you truly are one of a great mind.

On Friday December 10th, 2004, blue (1742) writes:

one looks in, one stands out....you my friend....are a brilliant man. to be sure. ~b

On Friday December 10th, 2004, ElegantKiss (399) writes:

Last two lines.. wow.. brilliant work, sweets.

On Friday December 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:

"there is a man i was.."what a brilliant line....adoration and applause. -zay

On Monday November 22nd, 2004, Endifference (266) writes:

I've been there. I've known it. I still know it. Welcome. -END-

On Monday November 15th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (361) writes:

indeed a brilliant and philosophical piece...remind of me Nietzche...-l-

On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Sin (1639) writes:

this was deep and profound and brilliantly worded, great write ~kristy

On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, Solace (1425) writes:

Brilliantly woven...The message is clear to me, and a virtuous one indeed...Different angles...Different views...Oft to be without is to search within...

On Tuesday October 26th, 2004, diavolessa (275) writes:

I am without, I must reach within The most profound and true lines I have felt in the longest time! now I remember why I love your poetry so much.

On Tuesday October 26th, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:

Perfect. I will certainly return to this just because it reaches me . . tightening my heart. ~ Rose

On Tuesday October 19th, 2004, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (120) writes:

this is wonderful.. the halting flow works wonders for the mood... i really like how the end unravels... beautiful job!

On Saturday October 16th, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:

glad you have seen this... glad you have declared it a breakdown... REACH ON THEN my friend... my brother... REACH ON... 1 LOVE, Seth & Trish too.

On Thursday October 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (10) writes:

'there is a man i was' amazing line. a deep sense of a tranquil lack of completion. there is a void i cannot name,tyhere is a man i was-amazing lines, ill probably remember them for a long time. great use of morbid expression.drik

On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:

this is perfect... "I am without..... I must reach witin" dig deep and pull out a perception thats managable and the only place to find it is within ourselves... bottom line.. thats all we are.. thats all we have. Fantastic work :::OLd

On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, sixsixnine (563) writes:

transcending energy in this piece... simply Atomic! reading again *669*

On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:

Great Stuff... I Got Something Similar. Its Just So Interesting How A Similar Concept Can Come Out In Many Fantastic Ways. Thanks For This Side. GPhD.

On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:

this was wonderful... ! nicely done... and good luck! :)

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