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Watching......................This nights sky;

Asking Benevolent "Time" to grant me peace,
To grant me patience and humility.........

Our trivial hopes, dreams, desires, and asperations......

Within this Wonderment....
Within this quandry;
This nights sky, and all of thiese stars..............

i wish to present my gratitude.......
for what has been "given"...........;

Gratitude for this ancient glance,
into
this
nights
sky...........

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On Wednesday August 15th, 2007, Mylissa (1075) writes:

fluttering the heart-strings...lovely.

On Wednesday August 1st, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1064) writes:

the sky is so full of wonders...I'm sorry I missed this before, this is a wonderful piece, and speaks volumes to my soul...I feel something like this, each time I glance at the night sky. Excellent. ~*Beth*~

On Tuesday February 14th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

*makes a wish* What a blessing you are m'dear....

On Monday February 28th, 2005, AniDayz (1267) writes:

this is so beautiful...i absolutely love everything about this wonderful piece...*brilliance*. thank you.

On Friday December 31st, 2004, sIo (884) writes:

you seem to have such an outlook on life that many do not have, i respect your poetry so much that i may now have to add you to favorites.

On Friday December 10th, 2004, blue (1740) writes:

your selfless view is truly admirable. a beautiful reminder of 'the little things in life'. wonderful words my friend! ~b

On Friday October 29th, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:

Beautiful. This is purity, sincerety, virginal tenderness of flowering desires. I am left with no choice but to fave this work. You are amazing. ~ Rose.

On Saturday October 16th, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:

this is a beautiful piece and your humility is beautiful... i wish more Americans would see and be this beautiful... 1, Seth

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

"i wish to present my gratitude....... for what has been "given"...........; " ..you have this way of making me reflect and wonder upon your words . .thank you

On Thursday September 9th, 2004, Endifference (266) writes:

You're pure, without a doubt. This ventured toward me like thoughts that were my own - like a translation of a common knowing. A marvel. And, being in Nevada, you get to see UFOs all the time in that night's sky, I'm sure...*so jealous* - END-

On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:

truly a beautiful piece of work...

On Saturday August 28th, 2004, NikesRain (1421) writes:

...I'm sorry I missed this before now. It's truely beautiful and lovely so simply put but with such feeling. Great work.

On Thursday August 26th, 2004, Stranger (281) writes:

Grace and wisdom; almost a psalm. Perhaps we should call you SageHumility.

On Friday August 13th, 2004, Choronzon (233) writes:

This is really peaceful. I like it a lot. Nice work.

On Thursday August 12th, 2004, sixsixnine (566) writes:

BEAUTIFUL* I LOVE THIS! * AGAIN YOU POETRY SO DEEP WITH SUCH SIMPLE WORDS... YOUR WORDS HIT MY HEART LIKE FIRE.... YOU'RE ONE OF THE GREATIST POETS OF I'VE EVER HAD THE PRIVELLAGE TO READ *THANX* *669*

On Thursday August 12th, 2004, Lydia Jade (790) writes:

wonderfully wise you are a poetic genius

On Thursday August 12th, 2004, elisa (2017) writes:

I love the falling star effect! enjoy the meteor showers:)

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