DarkPoetry -|- urbanhumility -|- i must...

i must...

i must...

I must tonight, reach deep within...

I must tell of all my frailty...
Its foolish life, its chance of "fading"....

Of all desire and tempting fate, turning all things wrong...

I must see the love of mothers,
I must feel my lover....

To belive in goodness.....

I must practice,
I must fool myself...

i lie and tell tales of virtue...

In this "belief" , in end, "it" is brought forth...

I must fashion....
I must make when all temptation is near.....

I must embrace the "adoration" of love,
I must be enveloped....

Or this vision is a lie, or this belief is dead...

Or my love,
or myself......

Fades away, never remembered never practiced....

i must...

i must remember....

i must belive......

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On Thursday July 17th, 2008, After hours (636) writes:

A prayer...amen..kudos mate.

On Wednesday August 22nd, 2007, unspeakable truth (144) writes:

Intriguing piece....

On Sunday October 29th, 2006, Mistress Shadow (381) writes:

This created a pause for reflection. Well put together. I'm surprised I've never stumbled into you before, and thus will keep my out for more from you. ~T

On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, Err0r (564) writes:

This was so motivational. I like this very much.

On Tuesday February 14th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1021) writes:

"I must embrace the "adoration" of love, I must be enveloped...." Amazing, just freakin amazing! I have chills upon chills from the other writes. You simply speak to my soul. Julia~

On Friday December 31st, 2004, sIo (845) writes:

"I must see the love of mothers, I must feel my lover.... " damn dude, your writing simply does ROCK.this is amazingly written.

On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (968) writes:

This had a sense of desperation in it and the message within I can honestly say I have been up against on more than one occasion. Almost a salvation-like crisis. Awsome job man. ~Ship!

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx (79) writes:

"or this vision is a lie, or this belief is dead" that line in particular stood out to me. but the whole thing is just powerful, without screaming it's message. great write.

On Saturday July 24th, 2004, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

Ahhh, desperation.

On Thursday June 24th, 2004, suicideseason (2102) writes:

_"i must fool myself"...that's the trick.very powerful streams of thought...moving piece.thank you.-tim

On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, Endifference (258) writes:

Quite the moving dedication. -END-

On Thursday June 17th, 2004, nell (327) writes:

a calming and desperate grasp for hope, that is what this leaves me with... wonderful thoughts urban, it was a pleasure to read

On Thursday June 10th, 2004, Jonas (877) writes:

love is a golden idol... and belief lends it its power... sometimes it looks like copper covered with patina.

On Saturday June 5th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:

wondefull urb, just wonderfull *favors*

On Thursday June 3rd, 2004, missanthropic (48) writes:

with this piece you have summed up those thoughts that daily allow me to continue reaching for myself.... excellent work

On Thursday May 13th, 2004, DoctorAsh (503) writes:

Very nice urban.. its nice to see some work around here on a [enlightening note]. Beautiful. [D&A]

On Thursday May 13th, 2004, batman nipples (2246) writes:

This is hypnotic, almost...it crawled into my mind, and will remain there, I imagine, for a good part of my day...thank you. **June**

On Thursday May 13th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:

another great work, a feeling of desperation and a sense of the unreachable. beautifully crafted and thoughtful

On Saturday May 8th, 2004, sixsixnine (569) writes:

sounds like a powerfull song*669*

On Tuesday April 27th, 2004, Stranger (297) writes:

So many layers in so few lines. So much faith and so much doubt. So much strength and so much vulnerability. So much talent and so much humility.

On Saturday April 24th, 2004, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

"I must see the love of mothers, I must feel my lover.... " .. .this inspirational write left my mind in wonder . ..wonder how there's real honest people like you in this world. Wonderfully done Urban ..couldn't have made it better than this.

On Thursday April 22nd, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (359) writes:

a very honest and pensive poem with so much passion filling the empty spaces of every verse...this is extraordinary, refreshing and tells a powerful message...-l-

On Thursday April 15th, 2004, manywalks (947) writes:

This cleansed a place in my mind, eloquently written, beautiful. ~ mw

On Friday March 26th, 2004, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

Very good.

On Wednesday April 7th, 2004, Instant Insanity (727) writes:

agreed, What can I say, I like it alot

On Tuesday March 9th, 2004, Drea (920) writes:

The need and the drive to remember and believe is powerful. Your words ring true. "I must embrace the "adoration" of love,/I must be enveloped..../Or this vision is a lie, or this belief is dead..." , those lines hit hard.

On Tuesday March 9th, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:

ONE LOVE... THAT LOVE IS AND NEVER DIES... ILLUSIONS FADE... REALITY RISES... Through Trish and I you live forever, and through you Trish and I do too... Without Trish there is no CHRIST VICE... CHRIST VICE and URBAN HUMILITY are ONE... Let PEACE be done.

On Friday March 5th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:

Wow I love this piece, very hypnotizing, lingering and delicate. Awesome work. ~L

On Thursday March 4th, 2004, hopeless (61) writes:

WoW.... this is excelent..... i am in awe this is wow.... favorites!!! wow this is so good.... ~hopeless

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