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the origin

It was in a "Creators" wish;

It was what saved you from
an Atheist hell..........

In whole, your essence...

Time played, Time glanced upon;
Times wilted promise....

The "water" that i drink;
The salt from my tears;

The "begining" that comes forth;
With the intensity of a firery sun-

Fail again,

There it has always "been"....

Waiting...........

my "will"

my "origin............

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On Sunday July 23rd, 2006, waterchica999 (38) writes:

I like your work its beautifully woven together

On Tuesday February 14th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

Oh my... I really have no words to give you, for this has rendered me without.

On Thursday December 22nd, 2005, An Expired Member (17) writes:

isn't it strange that such few words can tell a story??

On Friday December 31st, 2004, sIo (884) writes:

*bows* you are the master....this kicked ass, the ending was superbly placed and. great job!

On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, blue (1739) writes:

I agree, so great...I can't come up with anything to reflect such vision! ~b

On Saturday July 24th, 2004, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

More depressing than the actual reality of it...

On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, Endifference (266) writes:

FUCK, do I know you? Why are we resonating at the same speed? I have a few like this, they search for the same. I feel like a puss, this piece almost made me cry, honest. -END-

On Monday June 7th, 2004, sixsixnine (565) writes:

It's strange how in such few words meanings become endless in this piece *a most excellent piece* ~669~

On Thursday May 13th, 2004, evolve (2247) writes:

Well written, friend...an excellent poem...I love your use of quotation marks...it sets the piece alive.

On Tuesday December 16th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1800) writes:

Blib.. this made me think. thanks for writing and posting this dude..

On Sunday December 14th, 2003, Twilight (2101) writes:

i lovedthe way you produced this. from the spacing to the quotes. very nice urban.

On Wednesday November 26th, 2003, Mr King (623) writes:

yes!!! makes me smile! awesome... inspiring... mind and heart opening... rise my brother... rise... 1love2us

On Wednesday November 26th, 2003, Mr King (623) writes:

the paradox of the Creator and the Self... which is which or are they one and the same? ... not an ego thing... a Love thang.

On Saturday November 22nd, 2003, wilted (301) writes:

Definately provokes thought in me. Which not many things do now a days. 'Twas interesting.

On Saturday November 22nd, 2003, Spiritus_Frumenti (364) writes:

a perplexing piece...you could be talking about the "origin" of many things...god, nature, soul, will, time....maybe it is all of them combined...i don't know....very good write...-l-

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