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death in your eyes

I SEE DEATH IN YOUR EYES,
HOW DOES IT MAKE YOU FEEL?

IN YOUR COMPLEX MIND, DOES THE SIMPLE
IDEA MAKE YOU CRY?

LIVING ON BORROWED TYME, I BELIVE LIFE IS
THE GREATEST OF ALL GIFTS, AND TYME IS A LUXURY.

UNKNOWING TRUTH IS FELT IN EACH STEP.

FROM MADNESS ON, I LIVE FOR A STANGERS SMILE.

THE RESPONSE IS WHAT I LAY AWAKE AND PONDER FOR.

DEATH IN YOUR OUTCRYING EYES; THEY ARE RED WITH UN-HOPEFULL HOPE.

BUT YOUR COFFIN IS SO FITTING,I BELIVE IT DESCRIBES YOUR LIFE;
BEAUTIFUL BUT SAD.

AS I KISS YOUR FOREHEAD,

I SEE DEATH IN "YOUR" EYES............

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On Wednesday June 4th, 2008, AdrianJ (60) writes:

My girlfriend committed suicide when we were 16 and these were the sentiments that I felt, looking into her dead eyes, bloodshot, lifeless, life transmogrified to meat - over the deceptive illusion of success as measured by arbitrary grade. Thank you for this...

On Monday April 14th, 2008, An Expired Member (30) writes:

intriguing.

On Sunday May 13th, 2007, Mylissa (1085) writes:

Explosive, tragic. I enjoyed this.

On Saturday March 31st, 2007, An Expired Member (43) writes:

well spoken

On Monday December 18th, 2006, Brahman Sol (34) writes:

...their poetry...an understanding will be most inviting.

On Monday December 18th, 2006, Brahman Sol (34) writes:

Ignore the fact that I asked you "who?"...I should know who I'm writing of...you interperated my poem "Number Six" well...you were right when you said i "spoke w/ her dark silence." When I write poems like this I wear the mask of the individual & write th

On Sunday December 17th, 2006, Brahman Sol (34) writes:

...choose, can 'you' see death in her own eyes.

On Sunday December 17th, 2006, Brahman Sol (34) writes:

you've reached an unkwown in such taste, that you've felt death through another...sensing it's haunting aura. And I wanted to question you're comment on one of my poems...you said, "you speak with her dark silence". Who? & if seeing through the mask you

On Monday February 13th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

Sitting here crying... I cannot tell you how much this one has reached in and grabbed my heart and tugged on my soul. Julia~

On Friday December 31st, 2004, sIo (892) writes:

AH i love this, "LIVING ON BORROWED TYME" that was a crazy awesome line. this write was crazy awesome!

On Monday August 18th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

Complex and challenging...death has its own feelings aswell.-Kefka

On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:

I read all your poems, and most of them made me say "I'll read it again later" because I couldn't fully understand them, but this one I get, and I really really enjoy. Very awesome

On Friday May 9th, 2003, IceDragoness (251) writes:

"BUT YOUR COFFIN IS SO FITTING,I BELIVE IT DESCRIBES YOUR LIFE; BEAUTIFUL BUT SAD." I love this line! very great as always ~Dawn

On Friday July 25th, 2003, Nadir (631) writes:

Was a great read. I agree with IceDragoness. That line was amazing!

On Thursday May 8th, 2003, An Expired Member (34) writes:

Mysterious indeed. I love the way you write! Good job!

On Monday April 28th, 2003, SilentAssassin (39) writes:

Amazing, very very deep. You are a great poet!

On Thursday April 3rd, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:

This is increadable it is extreamly deep and difficult to understand but yet it is so understandable.

On Sunday March 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:

i love this.. this reminds me of someone i know...

On Wednesday March 19th, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:

one becomes tired of life and the glass over your eyes becomes thick, flowing like it's been aged 100 years.

On Tuesday March 18th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

you are so mysterious... who are you?! it gets more complex every time I read your thoughts... such perplexing thoughts!

On Monday September 15th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

Thank you for singing this dreamingful cry. It makes me wonder why we keep finding coldness...

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