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i cri

I CRY,

I CRY FOR ALL THAT I HAVE LOST.

THE TIME,THE CHILDHOOD,FOR WHAT I FEEL.

WHAT SADDENS ME SO?
THAT EMPTY SPACE?

THE ANGER,SO HELPLESS IN ITS ENTIRETY.
THERE IS NO HAND TO HELP.

TO LONLEY FOR WORDS, I CRY.

I CRY FOR ALL HUMANITY LOST,
ALL THAT WILL BE.

FOR ALL THESE THINGS I CRY,AND IN THIS MOMENT I CRY FOR

YOU............

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On Sunday June 22nd, 2008, Scarrzz (130) writes:

Well said. Your words describe a place I recognize. How can there be so much emptiness in such a crowded world?

On Thursday July 5th, 2007, Err0r (574) writes:

Such deep emotion expressed through each and every line. But I enjoyed the ending kind of leaves that lingering essence. Perfect.

On Tuesday April 24th, 2007, silent circus (380) writes:

we all cry....just that admitting it is a huge step, whether you realize the drops trickeling down to your chin are tears or not, we all cry, good write ~*dani*~

On Friday December 1st, 2006, Astra Dei (644) writes:

i can relate. Thanks for posting

On Thursday March 30th, 2006, An Expired Member (12) writes:

This is AMAZING!! I loved how the words went together...

On Thursday March 30th, 2006, gbuff69 (212) writes:

i cri 2

On Monday February 13th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

Amazing Charley. I cannot tell you how much I relate to this. I too, cry for those same things. You stun me...

On Tuesday January 31st, 2006, desekr8or (22) writes:

saturated with empathy, which is a great poetic ingredient. I feel your helpless pain and admire this work.

On Tuesday October 25th, 2005, Ifantisiz (22) writes:

Wonderfully written, I look forward to reading more of your work.

On Sunday April 24th, 2005, blue (1749) writes:

In you we find a source of purity seemingly lost to this world, maybe a reference point for humanities sake.. Truly inspirational. ~b

On Wednesday March 2nd, 2005, Sin (1636) writes:

very beautiful and inspiring...lovely all together ~kristy

On Friday December 31st, 2004, sIo (892) writes:

i agree with butter...that abouts all i can say.

On Sunday October 24th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

*of the person who wrote it.I really hope that makes sense...I absolutly love that about this piece,I find it extremely clever...

On Sunday October 24th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

What intrigues me about this piece,is the same sort of thing that gets me about the work of poet 'shortandpretentious'....to me,it feels so borderline between being so completely average and being complete genius...and it all seems to lie in the context o

On Sunday July 25th, 2004, sixsixnine (495) writes:

you're most defenatly one of the few poets i admire & am inspired by.. your works sadmadness but you do it like it's nobodies buisness unihibited expressions & innovative creations you're a true mastermind poet* love your work* 669 *

On Sunday November 16th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:

nice poem and so touching

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, An Expired Member (22) writes:

u have a way of fitting lots of emotion into very few words. i love your writting. so keep it up!

On Monday August 18th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

You can feel the emotion in this one..Hey i've gotten used to the big letters.-Kefka

On Friday June 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (28) writes:

this was a powerful piece, good job!

On Tuesday April 29th, 2003, DoctorAsh (506) writes:

how touching .. like a finger extending through the shadows to touch you on the tip of your forehead .. injecting thoughts ... nicely done

On Tuesday March 18th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

such a humanitarian you are:)

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