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i die for Your Hurt

                            I HERE AND YOU THERE,
                        KNOWN AND UNKNOWN, I SEE YOUR PAIN,
                          ALL OF YOUR INTERNAL HATE.

                    THE LOVE,THE COMPASSION, YOUR DEATHLY TEARS.

                          ALL OF YOU IN THIS ROOM,
                          REACH OUT TO TOUCH ME;
                    LET ME BE YOUR PAIN, LET ME BE YOUR DEATH;

                    AND IN WHOLE,LET ME BE ALL OF YOUR FEAR.

                     FORE IN LIFE THERE IS ONLY FEAR AND LOVE.

                        LET ME DIE LIKE CHRIST BEFORE ME,
                              LET ME DIE FOR YOUR HURT.............

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On Wednesday June 4th, 2008, AdrianJ (60) writes:

I love this work. I feel this so deeply for someone in my life in a way she can/will never fully comprehend. Your words are vivid yet eternal.

On Monday April 14th, 2008, An Expired Member (30) writes:

touching. powerful.

On Monday December 24th, 2007, italianbella (295) writes:

Short and simple but powerful and beautiful as well great write hon:)

On Wednesday August 22nd, 2007, Sketso (540) writes:

short and simple, yet it tells more than simple text is able to reveal. Bravo!

On Thursday August 2nd, 2007, An Expired Member (9) writes:

There is'nt much I can say that has'nt already been said but I think it's beautiful.

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, Rebell tiGer King (639) writes:

touching and inspiring thanks for sharing this

On Tuesday April 3rd, 2007, thefairytaleheart (21) writes:

this reminds me of a nine inch nails song... i believe it's called sanctified. ? anyways, i love it alot.

On Saturday March 10th, 2007, ANGELSLAYER (23) writes:

A noble cause...to want to alleviate someone else's suffering.To offer salvation.

On Sunday December 31st, 2006, heartdripsblack (759) writes:

this was simply amazing. i dont know what to say except thank you for sharing this poem. ~ red

On Monday November 13th, 2006, Mylissa (1082) writes:

This is a beautiful read. Very emotional.

On Saturday November 11th, 2006, mozarts cat (270) writes:

wow .. this makes so much sense to me .. i needed to read this =]

On Tuesday October 10th, 2006, An Expired Member (20) writes:

wow, ive never heard someone care that much. i wish i could find someone who cares that much, but no. i really like it tho.

On Saturday August 26th, 2006, An Expired Member (14) writes:

I saw this when it was first born. Remember Torn? Or Neveah? I am a Christian and this poem is the most beautiful one on this site. How do I favoritize poetry? This will be the first poem to go onto my Favorites List.. I heil CHRIST my SAVIOUR... Lo

On Saturday May 27th, 2006, Err0r (574) writes:

Caps lock envokes such wild emotion. I didn't expect a write like this to be your first one though. Go figure.

On Saturday April 15th, 2006, mywristshurt (524) writes:

and i to can see where you are coming from... and i can see both your emotions and the telling of the other you speak of...another good one

On Saturday April 1st, 2006, An Expired Member (12) writes:

This poem drew me towrds it, I dont have any words really to explane how I feel about this poem, All I have to say is that it is amazing, good work...

On Friday February 17th, 2006, MindRape (886) writes:

*sigh*....Your poetry is enticing we are left spell bound and in awe but....I read such heart felt emotions and all i can think is

On Friday February 17th, 2006, MindRape (886) writes:

"Why?! why is it never about me?" Why doesn't anybody feel this deep for me? Why are there no poems like this for me? Completely exposed ...unashamed...expression. :/ I envy someone that I don't even know the reality of just from reading this piece.

On Monday February 13th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

Wow, f*ckin wow! I cannot believe I'm just reading this one. Sting me again, please? Julia~

On Sunday February 5th, 2006, xserratedsoulx (279) writes:

you have my empathy...the desire to heal everyone, to take the pain away, but it could just never be enough. ~lauren~

On Tuesday January 31st, 2006, desekr8or (22) writes:

Amen

On Saturday January 28th, 2006, LostInDespair (199) writes:

What is left to say? I agree with all the others.. you fucking rock. ~Lost~

On Sunday December 18th, 2005, An Expired Member (39) writes:

damn that is fucking good kudos and many of them

On Tuesday November 29th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

very moving, very selfless and that is conveyed well along with the emotion behind it. i really like this piece. there are so many times i would give my wasted breath if it would mean the happieness of just one single person. thanks for sharing.

On Thursday November 24th, 2005, An Expired Member (16) writes:

awesome the caps were effective aswell

On Sunday October 30th, 2005, Err0r (574) writes:

I wanna jump on the bandwagon effect here. The caps add impact reguardless of what anyone could say. Way to get out what you need to say. :)

On Thursday October 20th, 2005, Ifantisiz (22) writes:

Beautifully put. Thank you

On Sunday April 24th, 2005, blue (1749) writes:

most definitley the work of a selfless being, a wonder in this day...your compassion is a true power to behold! ~b

On Tuesday March 8th, 2005, Sin (1636) writes:

self sacrificing and powerful...lovely all together ~kristy

On Friday March 4th, 2005, Loneal (118) writes:

This is the voice of an Empath, in some sense of the word - "Let me be your pain, let me be your death" ... beautiful write. ~L (Synthetic Darkness)

On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (321) writes:

beautiful and breath taking -kitty

On Sunday January 2nd, 2005, An Expired Member (9) writes:

beautiful writing, very powerful x maddy

On Friday December 31st, 2004, sIo (892) writes:

so much chance for all to take, yet so many unwilling to take it.

On Sunday December 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:

you sound like a person who is an empath...this write absolutely screams it. amazing. -zay

On Sunday October 17th, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:

I am stunned - You seem to be the hurricane . . and I am the rose, trembling in it's ferocious power. Wonderful write indeed.

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (349) writes:

such a humble piece..

On Sunday July 25th, 2004, sixsixnine (495) writes:

fucking sence an uncontrollable love seaking but not reaching yet facing the fear to pain seems to heal all we've suffered in vane... damn you make me wonder* your work is very deep* love it *669*

On Saturday June 26th, 2004, Instant Insanity (754) writes:

hmmm Well, I really have nothing to say after reading this poem, It left me speechless. dp

On Saturday June 5th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:

the alphabets in Caps enhance the meaning of this whole poem. emotionally charged with powerful expressions. -MeL-

On Monday May 24th, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

A martyr makes a weak ally, but a wonderful leader. A very good poem.

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:

you have an incredable skill of fitting so much emotion into such little text, thanks for posting

On Friday January 2nd, 2004, myscreamsilenced (5) writes:

Wow, I know that feeling. I really like how it's in caps, makes more of a statement, good job.

On Wednesday November 26th, 2003, IceDragoness (251) writes:

oh how i know the feeling of self sacrafice, and as everyone has said thus far, you've worded the feeling to perfection

On Tuesday November 25th, 2003, SalemLex (44) writes:

Urban, you keep the caps if you want, no matter what you did to the way the words looked it wouldnt change the fact that you have a gift for using words in a beautiful way. I really like and dont think that the caps do anything to the piece except make it

On Tuesday November 25th, 2003, SalemLex (44) writes:

stand out more.

On Thursday November 27th, 2003, Storm (185) writes:

Lex is right about the caps. And about everything else... you have a talent. A well used talent. Great work. Beautifully written.

On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:

i think the all caps works for this, i think it gives it more power to it. good write.

On Saturday November 1st, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

What person could resist a lover that would create such a decleration? This is like having your heart caressed by a warm spring created only for you and you alone. Wonderful work. ~JMDW~

On Friday September 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:

deep, extremely. All I could picture was a young adolscent crying for acceptance. great write.

On Tuesday August 26th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

...good...very good. i know, its not the most descriptive comment, but hey im new at this.-Zach

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, An Expired Member (22) writes:

i dont know who u wrote this for but i take it u care deeply about them. great job.

On Monday August 11th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

I like it gives me the feel of the everyday martyr that dies alone and nobody even knows thier name.

On Wednesday June 25th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

Wow...I really liked that...it was fairly short yet it got to the point...great job!

On Friday May 16th, 2003, Twilight (2102) writes:

very powerful. nice work.

On Saturday March 6th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

ok ok.. i wrote that about a year and a half ago when i had nothing to say. to live in sacrifice, to feel pain for the sake of others...beautiful.

On Monday May 12th, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:

powerful

On Thursday May 8th, 2003, blackdarkness (311) writes:

This is once agian beautiful...i love you work I think about your words for hours after i have read it...

On Friday April 11th, 2003, Nevaeh (27) writes:

i find your poetry very thought-provoking, very beautiful...especially this piece...beautiful is the blood of a sacrifice

On Tuesday April 1st, 2003, An Expired Member (94) writes:

strange piece i like it!

On Tuesday April 1st, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:

Very nice, and I rather like the caps.

On Wednesday March 26th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

powerful..stole a breath from me..emits a combination of so many feelings...very well done!!!

On Tuesday September 9th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

I couldn't agree more. -Kryz

On Tuesday March 18th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

yes, no caps. If this is sincere, if you are so very compassionate and lovely... well, you must be quite a gem:)

On Friday February 28th, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:

bar the all caps i really enjoy this piece, short, simple, sweet and tasty dark.

On Friday September 19th, 2003, Bluegirl (248) writes:

I agree, I don't really like the all caps, but the rest rocks

On Wednesday February 26th, 2003, nell (328) writes:

so short but with so much meaning to it,i can guess that you are a person who cares alot about others, good piece;)

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