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Darker

I am darker, I know my horror and revel in it,

Subversive and Demented,my Grey decicision is constant and practiced; all things i see age, and turn away.....

Within my movments there are many who would give up in despair, let alone cry before Death.....

Armagedon my friend and confidante,
The the Devil a good chat,
and Misery my blanket.

Within my Tempest i play with thoughts of Destruction and Pain;

Wishing and hoping to die a horrible Dark and meaningless death.....

I know that i am darker.....................

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On Saturday October 28th, 2006, An Expired Member (42) writes:

nice poem

On Sunday July 30th, 2006, veingo (590) writes:

Wonderfully said. Simple, but deep enough to drown in. ^V^

On Monday May 29th, 2006, gbuff69 (212) writes:

read The Lucifer Principle by Howard Bloom... I have a feeling you would like it alot. gina

On Monday May 29th, 2006, Ainsof (1814) writes:

u r...........darkest..........

On Monday February 13th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1057) writes:

... and I lighter! *glows* Wonderful.... Julia~

On Tuesday December 20th, 2005, An Expired Member (17) writes:

as i was reading this, all i thought about were flashbacks of my own life that put me where i am right now. it makes darkness seem appealing, wonderfully written.

On Thursday June 23rd, 2005, An Expired Member (8) writes:

it reminds me of myself and my friend Sarrah

On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, blue (1754) writes:

...this dug deep into me....like a grave. outstanding! ~b

On Friday December 31st, 2004, sIo (892) writes:

"all things i see age, and turn away....." what a line! this was so saddening yet so awakening at the same time, i love it!

On Monday December 27th, 2004, frozen (748) writes:

nice, really nice

On Sunday August 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (15) writes:

thanks for the comments! I love this poem,keep up the good work:)

On Friday July 30th, 2004, NikesRain (1503) writes:

wow, this was certainly ominous. Heavy and intensive and drawing in a way. nice work.

On Monday June 7th, 2004, sixsixnine (490) writes:

FUCKING MIND BLOWING +! love it! 669*

On Friday December 5th, 2003, Mr King (623) writes:

dark ass shit! ...darkness comes always be4 dawn... yet decisions made in the past can bring dark daze in 1's life... or at least lifetimes upon lifetimes in darkness... but grace always is there 2 balance karma & the sun is always shining...

On Saturday October 11th, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

hahaha.. I kept thinking of the "Gother than thou" theme. I think I'm just too light-hearted today. Everything I read ends up funny! We're all in darkness here.

On Tuesday September 9th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

"misery my blanket" oOo such vividness in your works. -Kryz

On Monday August 25th, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:

beautifully composed, i want more :D *~*aNDReW*~*

On Monday August 18th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

I think I will have to post my work with the same name, quite a good write my friend definitley raw.

On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:

although my comment probably doesn't mean much to anyone... I loved this. It burns inside as well, my friend.

On Tuesday August 5th, 2003, Kittichoo (44) writes:

There's a darkness in the soul that moves us on, keeps us together through everything... Well Said!!!

On Monday August 4th, 2003, An Expired Member (18) writes:

I love the darkness of this poem, very rich and elegant. I like "Misery my blanket", the imagery of it...a_o_h

On Thursday July 31st, 2003, DoctorAsh (507) writes:

tru-tiful [bowel] i like this, its all shinny like a chrome bumper - Wonderfuly done. [D&A]

On Tuesday July 29th, 2003, MindRape (889) writes:

*Poke Poke* Did you dissapear urban??? :(

On Monday July 28th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:

this screams hoRRoR...horror in seeing that there is no more hope, no more happiness! Still i think I am a little darker than you *evil laugh*

On Thursday July 17th, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:

twisting, shards of self pierce the veneer of a supposed homogeny and in shadow you are one with the harmony of your atmosphere

On Tuesday July 15th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

Mmmmmmmmm I like the dark things...things that go "Bump" in the niht...heh..Like this piece... ~Vel..

On Tuesday July 15th, 2003, AshtrayDirt (41) writes:

nice nice.

On Monday July 14th, 2003, hate_doll (328) writes:

mm...this is raw. I love it. I agree with bev, I love your darkness...

On Monday July 14th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

When I view this poem by itself I see a man without hope. Condemning himself to a bleak and meaningless existence. But viewed in the context of you other works it would seem a crisis of faith. I hope the latter.

On Monday July 14th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

Of course I could be completely off the mark either way.

On Monday July 14th, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:

Darker Than Thou... Good Peice.

On Saturday July 12th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

I love this piece, and I love your darkness....~Vel~

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