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eloquent design...

patterns.....

there are patterns of beauty........of embroidery.....of flowers....and you....

there are patterns of war......of self-destruction......hardship and of me.....

there is a design one can see....of beauty of equidistant points....of what you want.......of what reflection tells.......

there is a divine pattern of sweet language.........of dreams....

of what i see of you and me......
pattern of love and joy......can't you see

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On Tuesday October 21st, 2008, Stranger (297) writes:

Urban my old my friend. Always great to take a look a the world through your unique eyes. You have a symmetry and perspective to your writing that tilts things slightly askew, so that you can get a glimpse of what's on the other side.

On Friday September 12th, 2008, heroineyes (148) writes:

urban, this was excellent

On Monday September 8th, 2008, BrokenAngel (62) writes:

i read this 3x... i love it

On Monday September 8th, 2008, Mylissa (1056) writes:

beautifully written

On Friday August 29th, 2008, red headed angel (26) writes:

really catches you. very nice.

On Thursday August 21st, 2008, sixsixnine (569) writes:

This is a sacred language that feed the mind with heart. i love it

On Monday July 28th, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:

I like the way the end seems to bring the distance expressed previously together... where love and joy somehow blend war, self destruction and embroidery, flowers.... very unique, and well done.

On Friday July 25th, 2008, An Expired Member (2) writes:

nice!

On Friday July 25th, 2008, NikesRain (1422) writes:

i think i could read this over and over and never tire of it... whispering of soft velvet and dark marble... luscious and captivating... beautiful emotion and mind candy i'm finding in this

On Friday July 25th, 2008, heartdripsblack (777) writes:

simply superb as always. ~ hdb.

On Friday July 25th, 2008, After hours (636) writes:

mate, that was clever and charming...a man of wit you are..loved it

On Friday July 25th, 2008, Ms Moon (616) writes:

*huggles tight* this is so beautiful. like pearls of poetry

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