I Try Not To Read Between Her Lines

*Read normal first, then highlight and re-read*


She says:


I
don't
love you so much
as you would like


I've always dreamed of
getting stuck with
a man like you
(Prone to nightmares)


You make me sick.
It's in the way you talk,
always vomiting
so fluently in the language of love


You're just so good to me,
between the sheets,
how could I leave?


You support me
financially
as no one ever has before


You're so good to me,
and I hate it.
To me you are a
curse from
God...


I need you,
and can't stand it,
your smile, your embrace,
you're so naive...
like a child...
So senseless,
jumping for joy upon my arrival


I see
everything wrong with my life and
my whole world in you.


I love you now,
but I don't think
I will love you forever.


You are
so far from
perfect for me.
But,
Baby,
So long as it's in my interest,
I love you.





*Not personal or anything, an idea I wanted to try. Wish I could have done more with it*

More comments:

• On Friday, November 13, 2009, SalemLex (33) wrote:
  
  very nice, love the twist. I think I like it highlighted better, more fun, and sadistic.
  
  
• On Wednesday, January 7, 2009, Lylani (146) wrote:
  
  Brilliant piece, very clever & very true
  
  
• On Monday, August 11, 2008, warmaprylrain (188) wrote:
  
  applauds!! :)
  
  
• On Thursday, June 26, 2008, siGht in toucH (449) wrote:
  
  Damn this is awesome -symph-
  
  
• On Thursday, June 26, 2008, Narcissa (752) wrote:
  
  This was awesome!... and unfortunately what love typically comes to. Ill cross my fingers that you will never find that out.
  
  
• On Thursday, June 26, 2008, Sharon Rose (625) wrote:
  
  You're too smart to be such a romantic.
  
  
• On Thursday, June 26, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (693) wrote:
  
  The smart ones are the ones realizing no dream is better to chase than love.
  
  
• On Thursday, June 26, 2008, MoonishBunny (718) wrote:
  
  i must be a idiot then. though im getting brighter with each days light. but i still prefer the dark
  
  
• On Thursday, June 26, 2008, Narcissa (752) wrote:
  
  You are not an idiot...Im with you I perfer the dark as well.
  
  
• On Thursday, June 26, 2008, MoonishBunny (718) wrote:
  
  good. cause im sick of being here with no one to hold my hand *holds kelloggs hand* yay
  
  
• On Saturday, July 5, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (693) wrote:
  
  *glares at you both* don't wake up the inner idealist/romantic, he's very stubborn you know
  
  
• On Thursday, June 26, 2008, snakeskingrin (77) wrote:
  
  Quite a different take once it's highlighted...I think we ALL do that to some extent...kind of telling how it is without telling how it is and HOPING the other person picks up on your vibes...cool stuff. Thanks for sharing :) Snake
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, Mars (716) wrote:
  
  damn. holy shit. i got nothing to say.
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, saintedmad (1425) wrote:
  
  ahhhh...tricky. .. .just like the real world and real relationships.
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, Ghost One (14) wrote:
  
  whoa!!!! nicely done!!! bravo! hmmm... not shout how to type out a standing ovation... but damn dude... that was astounding.
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (693) wrote:
  
  Thank you so much, I'm glad you could enjoy the piece :)
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, Alanarchy (1483) wrote:
  
  So very cool. If you hadn't told me this wasn't personal, I wouldn't have known. The emotion is there, clear as day. Way to think out of the box. Write on.
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, Sketso (730) wrote:
  
  Amazing idea and delivery, as I said before... just too much personal pain as it (tum)bled through my mind.
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, MoonishBunny (718) wrote:
  
  i fuckin love this!