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"I Try Not To Read Between Her Lines" by Echoes of Orpheus

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*Read normal first, then highlight and re-read*


She says:


I
don't
love you so much
as you would like


I've always dreamed of
getting stuck with
a man like you
(Prone to nightmares)


You make me sick.
It's in the way you talk,
always vomiting
so fluently in the language of love


You're just so good to me,
between the sheets,
how could I leave?


You support me
financially
as no one ever has before


You're so good to me,
and I hate it.
To me you are a
curse from
God...


I need you,
and can't stand it,
your smile, your embrace,
you're so naive...
like a child...
So senseless,
jumping for joy upon my arrival


I see
everything wrong with my life and
my whole world in you.


I love you now,
but I don't think
I will love you forever.


You are
so far from
perfect for me.
But,
Baby,
So long as it's in my interest,
I love you.





*Not personal or anything, an idea I wanted to try. Wish I could have done more with it*



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On Monday August 11th, 2008, warmaprylrain (186) writes:
applauds!! :)


On Thursday June 26th, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (641) writes:
Damn this is awesome -symph-


On Thursday June 26th, 2008, Narcissa (718) writes:
This was awesome!... and unfortunately what love typically comes to. Ill cross my fingers that you will never find that out.


On Thursday June 26th, 2008, Sharon Rose (637) writes:
You're too smart to be such a romantic.


On Thursday June 26th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (417) writes:
The smart ones are the ones realizing no dream is better to chase than love.


On Thursday June 26th, 2008, Riddles Moon (637) writes:
i must be a idiot then. though im getting brighter with each days light. but i still prefer the dark


On Thursday June 26th, 2008, Narcissa (718) writes:
You are not an idiot...Im with you I perfer the dark as well.


On Thursday June 26th, 2008, Riddles Moon (637) writes:
good. cause im sick of being here with no one to hold my hand *holds kelloggs hand* yay


On Saturday July 5th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (417) writes:
*glares at you both* don't wake up the inner idealist/romantic, he's very stubborn you know


On Thursday June 26th, 2008, snakeskingrin (72) writes:
Quite a different take once it's highlighted...I think we ALL do that to some extent...kind of telling how it is without telling how it is and HOPING the other person picks up on your vibes...cool stuff. Thanks for sharing :) Snake


On Wednesday June 25th, 2008, Marionette Mars (504) writes:
damn. holy shit. i got nothing to say.


On Wednesday June 25th, 2008, saintedmad (1164) writes:
ahhhh...tricky. .. .just like the real world and real relationships.


On Wednesday June 25th, 2008, Ghost One (24) writes:
whoa!!!! nicely done!!! bravo! hmmm... not shout how to type out a standing ovation... but damn dude... that was astounding.


On Wednesday June 25th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (417) writes:
Thank you so much, I'm glad you could enjoy the piece :)


On Wednesday June 25th, 2008, Alanarchy (1600) writes:
So very cool. If you hadn't told me this wasn't personal, I wouldn't have known. The emotion is there, clear as day. Way to think out of the box. Write on.


On Wednesday June 25th, 2008, Sketso (541) writes:
Amazing idea and delivery, as I said before... just too much personal pain as it (tum)bled through my mind.


On Wednesday June 25th, 2008, Riddles Moon (637) writes:
i fuckin love this!


On Wednesday June 25th, 2008, DyingForYourRights (138) writes:
thats the way you love


On Wednesday June 25th, 2008, Sketso (541) writes:
...not truly.



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