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"God Made a Snow Angel Once" by Echoes of Orpheus

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I tell you,
She wasn't your average woman.


She seemed to have
Escaped a frame
At some point in her life
And yet,
Could not be done justice
Upon a canvas by any artist

A work of art
Too beautiful to recreate.







The artist was a youthful God,
Playing in the clouds

It was in a cloud that
He made a snow angel one day
And,
Stepping back,
He looked upon his creation

It was slender and shaped with
Every curve of perfection.
Twixt divinity and art.

This was to be her mold,

My angel...





And I now tell you,

She wasn't your average angel either.








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On Thursday June 12th, 2008, evolve (2228) writes:
I liked the first title better. :[


On Thursday June 12th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (418) writes:
Glad you spoke up, I wasn't sure which to use


On Friday June 13th, 2008, evolve (2228) writes:
It's a beautiful pen, too beautiful for my words. But I'm glad you changed the title back. It's what drew me in to such captivating words.


On Friday June 13th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (418) writes:
I'm very glad for once someone on this site voiced an opinion. And even more glad you enjoyed the piece.


On Wednesday June 11th, 2008, Marionette Mars (506) writes:
beautiful :D -mars


On Wednesday June 11th, 2008, Sketso (540) writes:
Not your average woman... not your average angel. A nice mix that speaks volumes.


On Wednesday June 18th, 2008, DIATRICUS (70) writes:
Can't help but agree with Sketso -- nice touch.


On Wednesday June 11th, 2008, Narcissa (721) writes:
What can I say? I love it too...beautiful.


On Wednesday June 11th, 2008, Please Press Reset (203) writes:
i love it too. precious. :)


On Wednesday June 11th, 2008, Riddles Moon (640) writes:
this is so gorgeous. i love it. truely love it. ^_^



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