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*Co-written with Thumper Moon, highlight the end*


No longer can the world hear

This man's voice,

Caring not to listen anymore...

This straining voice

Which once shook hearts

And rattled bones,

Expressing love as

The world had never known.

This man now a compilation of

Cobwebbed dreams, and

Hopes which died when

His world stopped spinning...

Watch if you will,

Watch as this man becomes





Absolutely nothing













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On Friday June 6th, 2008, fallen (275) writes:
Very clever and appropriate. Brilliantly executed.


On Wednesday June 4th, 2008, Nymphet Mars (537) writes:
i love the last part. beautiful write you too. -mars


On Wednesday October 1st, 2008, Nymphet Mars (537) writes:
two**


On Tuesday June 3rd, 2008, empty_remains (77) writes:
damn cool write love the effects


On Tuesday June 3rd, 2008, Sketso (626) writes:
Very effective use of color. Bravo!


On Thursday June 5th, 2008, Sketso (626) writes:
Ok, so I'm stealing the idea. ;) Toying around with it a bit, as I absolutely LOVE the effect! Hope you two don't mind?


On Thursday June 5th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (694) writes:
Not at all Sketso, better in your hands I'm sure. Not happy with what I did with the idea.


On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Mab (971) writes:
very effective font color...kudos to both of you :)


On Monday June 2nd, 2008, An Expired Member (8) writes:
Just to dissaper, that would be the world to me just to be gone as the man in this poem


On Monday June 2nd, 2008, An Expired Member (21) writes:
Words and visual - nice touch...where do I sign up?


On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Narcissa (724) writes:
Words of a injured soul...This hurts. Painful you guys...hugs the both of you.


On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Ms Moon (616) writes:
*hugs back* yay.


On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (545) writes:
very nice work you two, superb -symph-


On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Ms Moon (616) writes:
^_^ thank you


On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Ms Moon (616) writes:
loves it. had fun workin w/ you. we should do more. ^_^ and teach me to write like you please? pretty please? *innocent look* i promise i'll be good



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