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It was late and it was cold.
Erebus had outdone himself,
Never had I seen the skies so dark,
So lifeless...
Not a star in sight
And the moon hidden behind clouds


Yet,


She seemed to find something
In the air that night,
Some heaven-sent breeze
That brought out her angelic smile.
She ran ahead of me, through the tall grass
Dancing to some music I just couldn't hear.


But,


I didn't need to hear it
As my smile had already surfaced,
Defying the mood that
The night had attempted to impose upon me.
My smiles always did tend to mirror hers
Her happiness - was mutual.


Somehow,


She was all of the beauty
That I required from the night;
Camouflaged as she was in the darkness,
With her little black dress
And long, dark brown hair
I could see her perfectly


Because,


Beyond her silhouette, the scenery fades
No starry night, no crimson sunset
Could ever distract my gaze.
Next to her, this world is pale.
It is a covered candle
To her supernova star


Though,


When I caught up to her,
Following in her
Wake of magnificence;
I stared into those eyes of
Vivid mocha perfection,
Reaching out my hand...

And then I woke to remember
That she is
Not. Yet. Mine.




And,

 
I cried.



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On Friday June 20th, 2008, downstream (79) writes:
made my heart sigh with the echoes of a disappointed dream - despair paused by a moment only makes the return hurt that much more. But the moment of beauty in its own time frame is bliss - wonderful write ~downstream~


On Tuesday June 3rd, 2008, FallenAngelMarissa (3) writes:
OUCH. My heart.


On Sunday April 27th, 2008, The Fool (1045) writes:
This was so beautiful it broke me in so many ways, I wanted to break down crying. This was more then words, this was feeling. ~ Fool


On Thursday April 24th, 2008, saintedmad (1035) writes:
i love thes tops till wordss.. . .so poetically justified and dignified and driven, like nails, through the meaning of the enitre write. . .. they outline more than the bones of thie pen. .. . fantabulously creative piece; in the way you manuevered more emaning out of the words. .. . +ness


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2008, Narcissa (727) writes:
Beautiful...as always.


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2008, Velvet_Raventon (694) writes:
This is gorgeous. You are very talented.


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2008, Miss Mars (380) writes:
amazing visual. perfect. nothing more i can say. just PERFECT. -mars


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2008, Mortis Moon (592) writes:
beautiful as always.


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2008, Sketso (511) writes:
Yow... I rather expected something like that from the ending, due to the title, but it didn't detract from the flow at all. Well done!


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2008, Lipstick Whore (390) writes:
Like that moment between dream and awareness..that fleeting moment it all seems real...I felt the disappointment..



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