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Bubble Wrap Hearts

I'm tired of cupid
and his alcoholic tendencies

His aim,

Just isn't what it used to be

The gods seem to be

playing with sheets of our

bubble wrap hearts,

popping them all,
just for amusement.

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On Wednesday April 23rd, 2008, Velvet_Raventon (705) writes:

Oh this is such a nice comparison. It's the kind of poem people wish they had written themselves, but you did it first.

On Tuesday April 15th, 2008, Mab (1090) writes:

fabulous!

On Saturday April 12th, 2008, Geisha (814) writes:

*pops* I'm sorry, I have a very deep love for bubble wrap, it couldn't be helped. But anyway, great write!

On Saturday April 12th, 2008, Narcissa (718) writes:

Breaking hearts just for fun...Damn them! Excellent piece...as always.

On Friday April 11th, 2008, carlosjackal (1608) writes:

*pop**pop**pop* But the heart keeps going..always that one bubble that never gets popped. This was tastily written :) -Carl

On Friday April 11th, 2008, wonderlandhysteria (2196) writes:

Sharp write. Definitely worth a *heartclick*.

On Friday April 11th, 2008, Sketso (493) writes:

Well done! Unique imagery to tackle an ancient tale!

On Friday April 11th, 2008, deadrosesrdust (142) writes:

damn- i meant *beings.

On Friday April 11th, 2008, deadrosesrdust (142) writes:

aint this true, but sometimes u have to find it urself, not let other beigs decide what or who is right for you. like the poem, peace.

On Friday April 11th, 2008, Fallen Moon (548) writes:

i loves it! pop!

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