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"Of Tempest Relations and Foggy Temptations" by Echoes of Orpheus

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In the shade of a lonely tree I laid,
A lonely tree in the midst of a glade.
Watching the clouds that masked the sun,
Drifting, ever so peacefully.

Though I felt sorry for the clouds,
The taunting thoughts again returning.
Oh, how I understood their pain,
How I understood their yearning...

Suspended in the air unseen,
Ever looking down upon the earth.
Those vast nuptial skies between,
Lay over it like an iron veil.

Desire ever building up,
Passion and lust alike.
Living for that momentary connection,
In the moment that lightning strikes.

I left when I noticed reflections,
In those wistful clouds so gray.
I too am drifting and waiting,
Awaiting a foggy day.






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On Monday April 14th, 2008, Fallen Moon (554) writes:
ofcourse i understood, im crazy/awesome that way ^_^ *hugs back*


On Sunday April 13th, 2008, Fallen Moon (554) writes:
oh thats sad. *tear* good write dude


On Sunday April 13th, 2008, Fallen Moon (554) writes:
dont worry, youll get your foggy day. ^_^


On Sunday April 13th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (377) writes:
I hope so... Glad you understood it Moony *hugs*


On Wednesday April 9th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (377) writes:
*Reflects upon comments* I think everyone got the wrong idea from this... *sigh* More of a nightmare actually, Though upon first glance it is told soft as cotton candy, I agree there.


On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, Narcissa (724) writes:
Cloud watching like daydreaming...so peaceful. I drift away on your words. Wonderful as always.


On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, wilted (273) writes:
Abosulutely perfectly amazing. Your words painted a landscape so beautiful it cannot be described, so wonderous that I long to be no where else but there. This was truly beautiful.


On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (377) writes:
Thanks :) Glad you liked it, this was a new style for me and I enjoyed writing it.


On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, tangeled (556) writes:
mmm, dreamy... like eating clouds spun into cotton candy. delicious. ~ta~


On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1879) writes:
Totaly. I wish I had commented that.


On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, Miss Mars (380) writes:
oh yeth. i agree with my brother. totally. i like the title too. -mars


On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1879) writes:
title was aluring, poem was dreamy. good one, again and again and again



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