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*Just a feeling at the moment that needs to get out*



This man
Belonging
To no religion



Prayed last night






And yet the nature of the prayer
Made me believe
Even less












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On Saturday May 31st, 2008, Narcissa (721) writes:
Yup...still hopeless


On Saturday March 29th, 2008, Theappleofyoureye (453) writes:
hah. this is brilliant.


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, Narcissa (721) writes:
Every time I read this I feel hopeless. Powerful piece.


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, tangeled (526) writes:
i had to come back. props. ~ta~


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, After hours (571) writes:
A thought shared by millions but only written by you....nice piece


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, NikesRain (1474) writes:
such weight in concise lines... well done


On Monday March 24th, 2008, Ainsof (1838) writes:
I wonder if there is a prayer that does not reek of hopelessness....


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, NikesRain (1474) writes:
there is


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, Ainsof (1838) writes:
then why do you still vanish...


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, NikesRain (1474) writes:
that doesn't mean there is not hope, just a need to heal from a hurt... but this piece even praying to nothing... something might hear, and someone might pray for anyone praying anywhere...


On Monday March 24th, 2008, Geisha (752) writes:
I'm feeling this...


On Monday March 24th, 2008, tangeled (526) writes:
very nice, i've felt this way so many times, praying to nothing for nothing. ~ta~


On Monday March 24th, 2008, Riddles Moon (643) writes:
*hugs* it'll get better. even if it dont seem like it, it will


On Monday March 24th, 2008, Wolfaerie (148) writes:
Hmm...yes, I feel you.



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