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Dream Artist: Self Portrait

I'm standing in the rain tonight
To conceal feelings
That I can't let her see

Regretting
That the dreamer may not exist
Within the dream
Where she gets what she deserves

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On Saturday March 29th, 2008, Theappleofyoureye (408) writes:

id call this simply deep :)

On Friday March 14th, 2008, Trigger (131) writes:

This is a great piece. I love the first stanza because of the veiled meaning behind it. The emotions you are trying to hide, incredibly well put. -Trigger

On Thursday March 13th, 2008, Narcissa (724) writes:

But... what if ....what she "deserves" isnt what she dreams of? Then they both loose. Perhaps Im overanalyzing this. Its a sad and painful piece. You are always pulling on my heart with your words.

On Thursday March 13th, 2008, Chunky (60) writes:

nice man. like she can only get everything she deserves in a dream! bc...ya know... nice.

On Thursday March 13th, 2008, tangeled (556) writes:

this is good. i love your versatility. *cheers* ~ta

On Thursday March 13th, 2008, Geisha (806) writes:

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On Thursday March 13th, 2008, Geisha (806) writes:

But now that I had the time to think of an adequate comment; This was painful, and it left me wondering what happened...

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