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Apocalyptic Beauty: A Comet's Crusade

Earth-bound Comet

This celestial body
Served its purpose
Whereas the planet it threatened
Did not

A justified crusader
At last

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On Friday March 14th, 2008, Trigger (127) writes:

I am curious as to what the planet and the comet are supposed to represent. Based on reading your previous work, I know that this isn't about a comet and a planet ;). I really like this, by the way. -Trigger

On Wednesday March 12th, 2008, fallen (297) writes:

A comet can be noble and the earth had it coming, dam it! Pay the piper,LOL! Great stuff!

On Wednesday March 12th, 2008, Narcissa (734) writes:

Such a vibrant image captured in so few words. Amazing.

On Wednesday March 12th, 2008, Kurashu (39) writes:

I tried writing something like this a while back, and fail'd. Probably because I tend to be more verbose. Just like this comment is longer than it needs to be. So, I will leave you with a big thumbs up.

On Wednesday March 12th, 2008, blue (1757) writes:

this speaks volumes to me personally.. a succinctly enveloped truth. perfect targeting. ~b

On Wednesday March 12th, 2008, Geisha (777) writes:

*s'plodes*

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