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Visions of the Blind

How does the blind man
Look for love
How does the blind man
Picture perfection

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Not in proportions
Is true beauty seen
Nor is it in colors
Or anything between

Look not with eyes
Or any sensory perception
Senses a broken compass
Bleeding misconception

Create your map
By unfolding your heart
Into a two piece puzzle
Missing one part

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Says the blind man to those with sight:

You do not see

Says the blind man to those searching for love:

Close
.
Your
.
Eyes
.

*Definately a work in progress, the rhyming bit needs work*

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On Friday March 14th, 2008, Trigger (131) writes:

Work in progress? This is perfect. (in case you don't know, that is the highest complment I can give a poem.) -Trigger

On Monday March 10th, 2008, Fallen Moon (548) writes:

i loves it.

On Sunday March 9th, 2008, Mab (1090) writes:

it needs to be longer...I want to read more :)

On Sunday March 9th, 2008, Geisha (814) writes:

Heh

On Sunday March 9th, 2008, tangeled (556) writes:

i love it. very nice i agree with narcissa that stanza is beyond perfect. very nice write. ~ta

On Sunday March 9th, 2008, Narcissa (718) writes:

"Create your map By unfolding your heart" if you change anything dont touch that stanza...its perfect. I think the whole piece is equisite.

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