great stanza - cant wait to read the whole thing.

Yes, please repost. I would also like to read the whole poem.

I'd love to read the rest of it. Don't put too much stock in the number of responses a poem gets. I've had pieces with like 250 views and no response so either magic fairies are going back to click on it or some people must like it. This last stanza that you posted is exceptional. I would truly reconsider posting it in its entirety.

Thanks, taken from an old poem on drinking and how it was a "temporary and artificial heaven" for making all the bad thoughts go away, though it never got any responses... I liked this stanza though so I brought it back

Sweet. I like it...-Gin