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Whoring out a soul

Crying blood and bleeding tears
Her body is confused
Just a common prostitute
She has been abused

Her Innocense gone forever
Her youth has been raped
Through excessive decadence
She could not escape

Beware this tainted woman
She's plagued with STD's
But this woman is a demon
Worry not about disease

There's something not quite right here
This woman isn't whole
Something important missing
She's whoring out her soul

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On Friday October 10th, 2008, Leith Plunkett (320) writes:

What a powerful last line, it really closes with a slap to the face. The ryming sounded great, not forced. Nice write :-)

On Sunday May 4th, 2008, Nalle (68) writes:

I love this one... even though I think that even "common women" can become "prostitutes". They just do not sell themselves for money. In any case... greatly done.

On Sunday March 9th, 2008, Kui (703) writes:

Very good meter, I'm diggin' it

On Saturday January 26th, 2008, Syringe (70) writes:

This is a great poem. Something that once was just a job is now her identity. Anything prior is forgotten. kudos with the rhyming.

On Tuesday January 1st, 2008, An Expired Member (34) writes:

i think that this is a most extraordinary poem. love the way you can rhyme with no difficulty. i'm anxious to read more of your work. -mars

On Friday December 14th, 2007, Argentum (15) writes:

I have a feeling that you have a far better understanding of what this all means than you'd like to... very well done.

On Thursday December 13th, 2007, Unforgotten (153) writes:

Very good poem. Glad to see some rhyming goin on! :) and as Raven said good idea behing the words

On Thursday December 13th, 2007, Ravenblade (273) writes:

Very well written, I liked the emphasis at the end that its more than just an act, but the moral degradation, or maybe thats just my understanding, well done. I look forward to reading more.

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