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Broken

It seems to me like something
That I should Let you know
For once you didnt break my heart
You missed and crushed my soul

I'll bet you weren't aware
That so much damage could be done
Im going to be honest
I'd prefer next time you use a gun

At least I'd be in a better place
Where I could start anew
Unfortunately for it to be paradise
I'd have to be there with you

I love you and can't stand it
There's nothing I can do
How can this love be so one sided?
To me it feels so true

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On Monday July 14th, 2008, Tearful Faery Moon (621) writes:

i know waht you mean *huggles* know way to damned well.

On Sunday May 4th, 2008, Nalle (80) writes:

Hole shit, I can ABSOLUTELY imagine what you mean with those two last lines. Jesus... Well, anyway, once again well done.

On Tuesday February 12th, 2008, An Expired Member (8) writes:

I fell as if I just died reading this as I can relate to your every word. Amazing how no matter what a certain someone does to us, we still feel as if we can not exist without them. I loved "Unfortunately for it to be a paradise, I'de have to be there with you" Beautiful, Thank You.

On Tuesday January 8th, 2008, An Expired Member (7) writes:

very deep..good write. i can find someone to dedicate this too..

On Tuesday January 1st, 2008, An Expired Member (48) writes:

a true story. really straight to the point and i can relate my life story to this... -mars

On Monday December 24th, 2007, italianbella (299) writes:

Great rhyme scheme it all just flowed so flawlessly togather great write hon:)

On Tuesday December 11th, 2007, RubyXero (477) writes:

i like that "for once you didn't break my heart, you missed and crushed my soul." oh that sucks, wanting to start new, but not wanting/ready to let go.

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