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Steam of conscious

Everything was
Now nothing isn’t
Either
Isn't it?
Expensive yet worthless
A pun on immortal
Immoral yet pure
Spiritual little devils
No?

Empty seat
Throbbing memory
Buzzed Innit?
Sinned me
Didnya ya
DIDN’T YOU?
H(i)Mmmm…
Why?

Wrong riting
Swear without words
AskOff
Write Off
Bulls Eye
Speak without I
Like you without I
That ever lasting lie

Steam of conscious
Burns
NO?
smoke eye
Singe cigaretteskin
End and then begin
Whats left that
Money cannot
Buy?

Why?
Did I forget to ask you
Why?

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On Saturday March 1st, 2008, skully (54) writes:

Thanks Col. not used the title before but I didn't like another one I did so much (full stops) and it was a sort of result of thunking with that.

On Saturday March 1st, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:

excellent originality...is this a re-post I think I recognise the title? Anyway...the poem twisted and turned in its labryinthian skin...and the staccato presses of language connected to thought was write out the school of avant-garde; interesting to see, even better to read. I hope you receive some feedback for being something different; it's not always easy, it's even harder to be good with it. Best regards - fine effort, Col..

On Saturday March 1st, 2008, Kui (729) writes:

*steams*

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