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when flying on autopilot
there is this certain knowledge
that you just might crash
while jumping off a cliff
there is that certain recognition
of one’s possible fate
you might just hit water
but what if you hit rock?

head slamming against stone
skull cracked open
the sea shamelessly pulling you in
and you oblivious
carelessly drifting away

this is very much like love
people write poems about love
but no one writes the obituary
when it’s over
and believe me
chances are
it will be over
the only real question is
will you be over
right along with it?


obituaries:

John Doe
a guy who wasn’t afraid to love!
dead at 39
poor dead bastard
oh, he’s still breathing
but he’s dead
the look in his eyes says it all
all the light is gone
his heart is still beating
but it’s dead
chewed up and spat out I tell ya!
a painful mess to look at

services will be held at The Blarney Stone
a grand Irish Pub!
where he can be seen
drinking his way into an early grave




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On Thursday June 5th, 2008, RubyXero (460) writes:
Ha! nice. its true too. terrible stuff...yet we all go through it. loved the "obituary" part.


On Monday June 2nd, 2008, After hours (576) writes:
I read this when I were at a friends so I couldn't comment at the time, but it stuck with me to the point that I had to search, find and just say.....Fucking brilliant


On Friday May 30th, 2008, Sharon Rose (637) writes:
I know I don't comment on your works much. And for some reason I have been extremely reluctant to add you to my favorites, for all that I have read everything you have ever posted and rarely found anything lacking, anything that didn't in some way connect to some thought in my own head, but expressed better than I know I could manage. You are blunt in a different way from me and I like your directness far better than my own. At any rate. Love dies. I write about it all the time. I should start writing about how it lives. Maybe I'd like my bluntness then. Have a good funeral party. :)


On Thursday May 29th, 2008, tangeled (526) writes:
brilliant idea, well executed. ;) ~ta~


On Thursday May 29th, 2008, Lipstick Whore (419) writes:
Wonderful sense of how we use humor to mask pain in both action and with our words. I thoroughly enjoyed this work.


On Thursday May 29th, 2008, DowngradeBeauty (58) writes:
This was great, the first few lines pulled me in, the rest just sucked me under, I was particularlly fond of the way you termed the sea to be shameless. Good show doll! Well done indeed!



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