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"three words you shouldn't say at a violin concerto" by fallen

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you can hold her hand
and look in her eyes
say something
say anything
but don’t say those three words

if you do
it’s over!
for you anyway

she’ll wrap them around your neck
drag you around town
parade you in front of her friends,
family,
neighbors
even the neighbors’ dogs
and the dogs will laugh at you
because they know something you don’t
and while they laugh
the cats will purr with conviction and point
knowing instinctively who the really pussy is
 
do yourself a favor
keep those three words deep inside
use them to keep your heart strong
and fierce
don’t let them slip off your tongue
and keep those pussies purring with uncertainty
about those three words
they yearn to hear

and if you find yourself at a point
where you have to say them
say them
but make sure you mean them
and say them clearly
and with honor
but not often

she’ll ask you to say them over and over
but don’t listen
say them once a month
but not every month
keep her guessing
keep her on her toes
because love shouldn’t sound like a broken record
it should sound like a violin concerto in the dark





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On Thursday June 26th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (395) writes:
I've read this several times and just realized now that I have yet to comment, I love this piece.


On Thursday June 5th, 2008, RubyXero (477) writes:
damn pussies rubbing it in your face. *waves fist* haha. this was great.


On Friday May 23rd, 2008, Zen (634) writes:
awesome.


On Friday May 23rd, 2008, Lipstick Whore (408) writes:
This is delightful! Whimsical and humorous with just enough edge! I love this!



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