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that haughty, crooked smile wounded me
on a battlefield best suited for conquered men
i spelled her name with the clotting blood
that ran down these broken, shaking hands
still dreaming of the time they held her heart

her hair blew wildly in the wind
those auburn curls danced redowa waltzes
of twilight fire and shimmering strands
and her eyes…
her eyes were the color of forgotten moons
with soft blue hues of speckled mist
and though I tried to look away, i held her gaze…
and watched these drowning lids betray all hope

with stammering words i sang of those forgotten moments
with lavish treasures found in moonlit nights;
wet, glistening kisses with all the fire of writhing suns

i begged for lies!
i begged for anything but this!

and when my pleas fell to the wind
i buckled forth with lurid sighs,
unsheathed my sword
and watched these hands…
these.broken.shaking.hands.
carve out my empty heart in shame

I held it forth
(a final offering to her)
"take what you will and burn the rest
because it always loved you best."



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On Friday January 11th, 2008, Wolfaerie (133) writes:
As always, lovely imagery, and raw emotion. You have a way with painting voice in your words. The last stanza makes for the perfect tragic, romantic, end


On Wednesday January 9th, 2008, Chimauron (123) writes:
"Take what you will and burn the rest..." Chilling line. Great imagery too, very descriptive. Well done.


On Wednesday January 9th, 2008, An Expired Member (2) writes:
very nice choice of words, outstanding all around



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