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So real: (inspired by the late jeff buckley)

All i could have hoped... is that you'd be inspired by act ..ual events,
esoteric in grace, bless'ed synergy within christ's qu(w)ilted hands..
Crayon candles of blood.n.bone, .. it's the reality that br.aches me.
She s.peaks in degrees .. a loquacious inn.(h).er ~ spilling over ...

                       ... i only wish to be her afterglow ...

                  Combine butterfly tummy's in rhapsody bliss,
                           a global affection to kiss.n.chase.

         You're my quint.essential exhale: who taught me 2breath..
                      ... and I don't even know y.our scent ...

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On Monday October 13th, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (752) writes:

Beautiful piece - perfectly fits with your inspiration for this one. I love Jeff Buckley's music and style too.

On Monday October 13th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

mm m .. . .makes two of us; buckley was.....internal; he left way too early....

On Monday October 13th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

crayon candles;;;;;;;;;;;; what an effect. the afterglow of ehr and waxen images against a skin. . .. . . a dream of what IS in the ebb of waking reality. . .. . gawds. .. . egads. . ..crayon smell and you too? im done....

On Sunday October 12th, 2008, Narcissa (727) writes:

I didn't know he was dead. What a great piece Im sure hed be honored to have a talented pot to compose a wonderful dedication.

On Sunday October 12th, 2008, Narcissa (727) writes:

*poet* sorry

On Friday October 10th, 2008, Lipstick Whore (502) writes:

Love this--had no idea who Jeff Buckley was but am downloading some of his music as I type. Just the fact that he's done a Leonard Cohen song makes him interesting and worth further investigation. Kudos to you on this write. As always, I so admire your style and originality--yer a keeper!

On Friday October 10th, 2008, freudian-slip (394) writes:

I want to blow the dandelion in your face with this one. I love the warmth in this.

On Friday October 10th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

butterfly tummys; so real. . .. .. i think you crushed me somewhere in between the lines of 'crayon candles of blood'n'bone' and 's.peaking in degrees'. . .. . buckely was divine, a little ahead and behind his time both. . .. . . allegorical to your words here. . .. but yours are more suspended in time. [and i DO love this; really i DO. . . . .] 'that was so reallllllll'----"i only wish to be her afterglow"; a woman could burn for hours, for years, for lifetimes with that line whispered......mon dieu------collage me. .. .. .

On Thursday October 9th, 2008, warmaprylrain (189) writes:

(... You're my quint.essential exhale: who taught me 2breath.. ... and I don't even know y.our scent ...) ~this was lovely and amazing, as your writing always is to me. ~rain

On Thursday October 9th, 2008, estherbell (108) writes:

this is something beautifully intoxicating to inhale.

On Thursday October 9th, 2008, disposable (142) writes:

brilliant! absofuckinglutley brilliant!

On Thursday October 9th, 2008, Alanarchy (1695) writes:

Great word antics. Cool.

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