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violet crumbles

If only you knew:

The moon would soak in castle'n'stone...
installing a stillness,...with every:blow

And 'I'......

I would breath just a little longer..
... 2. feel your life on my neck.

Speak of unspokens........ 'talk of us' .....
....tell me a tale; .. of times ahead.

...your the closest ive come to 'feeling'.........{period}

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On Sunday October 5th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

do you know how good this is? how good you are? know it.

On Friday September 26th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

gawds; this is breaking. ....i jsut love. this. muchly.

On Monday September 22nd, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

and im abck for another bite. .. .mmmmm yes. truly this is the stuff, like arsenic or hemlock, it kills sweetly. . .. . ive amde myself a glutton with these words. .. either way, im killed, through the food for thought or thesweet drippy tongue and groove poison.. . s.p.layed and waiting for more evocative rumblings.

On Tuesday September 9th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

again and again and again...cant figure out why i bookmarked. .. until i found it jsut now. ...its the words in 'quotes'----read together subliminally----'I' 'talk of us' 'feeling'.....i talk of us, feeling. ...nothing else, jsut 'feeling'......something profound in that relaxed under.state[d]ment....

On Wednesday September 10th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

i mean.. .. did i really need to bookmark this? did i? when the words are already 'there'.....'felt' for miles around; crumbles, rumbles...humbles a woman... .

On Thursday September 4th, 2008, After hours (636) writes:

Research!....dam...you are good.lol..

On Thursday September 4th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

tell me a 'tale', one not from the 'head'....but one from the (h.e)art[h]

On Tuesday September 2nd, 2008, Narcissa (727) writes:

*melts*...what woman wouldn't want these words whispered...no tattooed on her skin from the breath of a lover....

On Thursday September 4th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

precisely. . .. .

On Monday September 1st, 2008, urbanhumility (1374) writes:

truly inspired......your words fortell a fragile hope......subtle.....well done.........urban

On Sunday August 31st, 2008, Lipstick Whore (502) writes:

I continue to admire your creative voice. This is lovely, the last line is particularly expressive. Well done, as always.

On Sunday August 31st, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

these words veiling something so nearly open; it leaves one gasping {{period}}

On Sunday August 31st, 2008, elisa (1991) writes:

a true 'feeling' is so much deeper than a shallow touch. ..so pure it permeates a moment and becomes timeless. damn. i love ...

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