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oral baptism.

Like a 10inch tongue....i'm lick'n my chops,
basted lips in pepsi sweat......fuck i love the wet season.
Close your eyes & open your mind... pack lite,
s.KreaM from the inside:out.
...Break every rule that Mt. Moisture haz.2.offer~
A vending machine of rolling eyes and candy convulsions....
how beautifully your button s:wells within the chronicles of
a striding tongue,...I love it when you speak jibber'ish,...
~ motion your bones in a god like manner whilst i summon
the prophet to (su).spend a while.....
...'Peak'...'Summit'... it's all the same................................
I shall (N)'everest' till i'm on top;)
.............Breaking bread with the butterfly angel..............
~drawing from the puddle that bought Bethlehem to tears...
...Your the sweetest of mary's in a long line of whores.

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On Monday September 1st, 2008, freudian-slip (394) writes:

left felt... you know:o

On Monday September 1st, 2008, freudian-slip (394) writes:

so heated yet I felt left wanting more

On Friday August 29th, 2008, Crush Room (54) writes:

Hot? yes...Steamy? yes....Erotic? yes....Lucky woman? Whoever she is, yes indeed. Intelligent use of words and metaphors, but, I must confess...I prefer your gentle side...xx

On Saturday August 23rd, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

also, the 'breaking bread' reference [besides the morning after and communion] but bread as the body. . . ] wow- -- burned to the core but not broken kind of thing. . .. or is this a soft mutual breaking? of bread[s]. .. ::::::::

On Saturday August 23rd, 2008, Sin (1622) writes:

oh this was sweet satisfaction..i like how the punctuation broke this up with a stop start like a studdering heartbeat and i agree with saintedmad loved the wordplay *tips hat* ~k

On Friday August 22nd, 2008, postcardsfromiraq (14) writes:

Very nice, definately bookmarkin this.

On Friday August 22nd, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

after much [un]steady breathing; mercy. ... .she should scream 'mercy'; again, such a charged write. ...and i like how you became a prophet [wonder if its elijah or john?] foretelling of future events, introducing a 'second coming' to the body. .. and how your use of punctuation adds to the both the building of a climax and the tearing down of walls, like a temple, a peak, a visual effect to match the sounds...and the internal suffocation of silence; i dont know about the rest of the women 'underneath you' [see comments below ;) ] but i held my breath, or else you caught it. . .or something.. .and so much fore.[word].play...soooo much forward wordplay....ic ant tell if youre made for heaven or purgatory? agony or ecstasy? or both. .. . im exhausted.

On Friday August 22nd, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

and i think my favourite lines are "Close your eyes & open your mind" and "s:wells within the chronicles of a striding tongue," because of the alliteration and the intendre of s:wells, [the making of a well inside of her...wells seem to be a common theme for you:: hmmm] how deep the rivers run through and in her,maybe because of you both physically and an the 'deeper' level; like you are coursing through her very veins, so deep and drinking from [her]/ desire. . .. beautifully inclined write.

On Friday August 22nd, 2008, fallen (275) writes:

Exceptional and vigorously sexy.

On Friday August 22nd, 2008, Lipstick Whore (502) writes:

mmmm--this is delicious--i think i got a little weak in the knee. As always, stellar write, love your style.

On Friday August 22nd, 2008, elisa (1991) writes:

anointed lips.. and christened tongue. enjoyed every word.

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