The only thing I don't like, is that very last line. Other than that, this is awesome.

I want, I want, I want, a man who will write poetry like this for me!

i love this more and more...every read resounds. ... the thing about that ocean [howling or not] is that its really all jsut one 'body'...where it touches one, it also touches the other as well .. both. ... together. feeling the same rhythms even perhaps. ..

Two...Creating an impact to create one...A beautiful devastation indeed.

this evokes so much, beautifully so... i think i won't read anything else today and lets its effect linger the day long... absolutely gorgeous...

1) the title---> bl[in]d[side]. .. .inside?? 'feels' fairly [un]familiar. ...how is it hands can shake with non.aesthetics? egads. notice even a warmaprylrain is stopped and stilled in the dark.light of your words. 'something that makes you crash' reads as both universal 'you' and very intimate, specific 'you', as if youre longing to know what makes a said woman 'crash'and burn, fall apart, surrender [white flags].. and the way you pin/pulse\point.s an internal affair, as if the world itself [there'll be nothing left] is destroyed, but not the lovers; the tides themselves will be rendered powerless compared to what lies between you and her.....and of course, at the beginning of this, you left her ambiguous. .. and then....

the transition, of wor[l]ds, brings t.his 'her' into BEing...and in the end, youre left 'looking up' [from the bottom: helter skelter]; youve brought about some kind of rapture through the iamges of crashing, burning, killing time, and of course----another kind of rapture more personal. one from the bl[in]d[side]; one both (ironically---b/c its blindsided) visually commanding and touching.ly done...done...spent....im done....wow. +(\)ess

Wow... I was rather caught off guard by this. I liked it very much. I'll be sure to read more of your work.

....But..., there has 2:b more. Something that makes you crash,.... I want devastation. ... OMG, these words are the voice within my heart and soul that are becoming lost to a silence, longing to be heard.... and feel the same impact as you speak of here...sighs.... but still only silence... I really like your wk. ~rain

thanks mate, i read all your stuff, sometimes your just so dam hard to comment on,...i actually think you a good foundation for a site like this...you're relentless man,..cheers

wow. and wow again. ~ hdb.