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You were like that sometimes....so many pieces,
mosaic arma'ture: provides little support in a concrete world.
A batik aura,...where all primary colors paint within:themselves.
I always wondered what it would have been:
...to put you back together...a labor of love i imagine...

I watched you cry,..i witnessed your weight.less side..
where nothing is left,.. it scared me in all honesty.
And the way you spoke a salt prayer to any god that would listen,
an opening: of one.self,..i'm not sure you can ever come-back
from something like that.

By sleepy dawn it was standing room only,...i felt so amateur,...
i must have looked - such a 'human'
Think then i realized:..... that's why you belong:
                                             
                                       In so many pieces~



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On Friday October 24th, 2008, technicolour-girl (23) writes:
marvelous


On Saturday September 6th, 2008, freudian-slip (394) writes:
sinking beauty from you once again


On Friday September 5th, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (751) writes:
Wow, fantastic imagery! I can definitely relate to this feeling. "I always wondered what it would have been: ...to put you back together...a labor of love i imagine... "... Love the realization that it isn't really in your power to fix all that. Perfect! Ciao, T/S


On Tuesday August 5th, 2008, Lipstick Whore (502) writes:
We should all strive this hard to understand and accept..this is wonderful and heartfelt. Lovely write.


On Sunday August 3rd, 2008, downstream (94) writes:
a realzation that comes from within, mind and soul together get that sometimes people are best just the way they are - the love, admiration, and the journey that brought you to your conclusion are all vivid in the writing, Thank you for sharing it with us ~Downstream~


On Thursday July 31st, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:
------the sun came up this morning and smiled on me, reading this, yet again.. ..i keep thinking, what is so ghastly about being or looking so 'human'? humans are created by a creator, meanign we can never be separate from the divine; it is INside of us, of you. .. i see it as easily as the sun outside. .. human makes you more real, as do these words, 'piece'ing together a beautiful realm of ethereal messed.upness. .. . completely sur.renderable...good morning. +(\)


On Tuesday July 29th, 2008, fallen (275) writes:
Lovley, reflective piece. I truly enjoyed this. Thanks!


On Tuesday July 29th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:
....powerfully intimate 'look/see'....and you used paint....[sigh]...and the batik reference----[of course my voodoo.doll.word mind makes allegory ot deaeth, because batiking is 'dying', with the exception of the wax.winged part that is saved so pure].. ..and the 'pieces' in the end.....a staggering broken climax; the kind a woman is left in when the right words penetrate mind/body/soul. ...and the only thing left ot do is put the pieces of 'her' back, into you....deftly tied into the mosaic beg.inning of t/his need. . .. **clickety click


On Tuesday July 29th, 2008, Spiritus_Frumenti (359) writes:
this left several images in my head. altogether a great piece..."a labor of love i imagine" was my favorite.


On Tuesday July 29th, 2008, Ms Moon (621) writes:
this made me cry. beautiful.


On Tuesday July 29th, 2008, heroineyes (150) writes:
gorgeous this is...like it i do



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