DarkPoetry -|- After hours -|- thirsty:

thirsty:

I miss you: crave you...i have no right.... i know that.
I've removed the sugar, it's a brass tacks write...
I'm calling for an internal invest:agation..., an emotional 'sting'
Kick'n and scream'n from inside:out,..resistance is futile.
I offer no defence, mentally shackled from A-Z,
my only solace found in~yo.U.~...haha, i'm prepared to be korny,
this is the thing, a replenished juvenile of Saturn return.
I'll exchange penny's for pop-ups.....i'll - t:ache you in any form...
Global breakdown,... mirage or not... i just want u girl.

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On Sunday July 27th, 2008, Narcissa (727) writes:

Thank you...This made me smile."I'll - t:ache you in any form."...Ahhh... Lucky girl you got there my friend.

On Sunday July 27th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

....still, this stills me. .. . some kind of enchanted divulging secretive hush. .. .almost as if your head is hanging down and yet your giving it up. . .. stilled.

On Friday July 25th, 2008, Lipstick Whore (502) writes:

love your style and want someone to write poetry like that for me!

On Thursday July 24th, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:

intersting use of syntax and punctuation...also there seems a semi-flippant tone lurking in the maelstromic mad-wordplay; leaning slightly more to the avant-garde/post-modern type styles....but, beneath the surface appearance perhaps lies the clue. It's just that sometimes the answers are disappointing, the guessing is the fun in the game, I really like your offense...

On Wednesday July 23rd, 2008, Tinuviel (65) writes:

Scattered, but captivating.

On Wednesday July 23rd, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:

I cant comment now that Anessa did.. Good write bro

On Wednesday July 23rd, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

i found a dryspell. ...there are so many [ahem] assuaging thoughts in this. . . but the line that holds me the most is the o.pening, the admittance, the confessionalbox again. . .the HEart of how you speak so p[l]ain and make it sound crushingly beautiful....is there any girl who could find a way to stand amidst all this? ...and that last breathless line....thirsty?? well by all means, drinks are on me ;]

On Wednesday July 23rd, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

i'll be back when i can see the screen: dont you dare move.

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