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Take my hand.

Call in the dogs..... link thee arms, and scour the planet........
........................it's a full scale search.
I don't know where to start.......but i just can't stop,
.....I hope you feel it too.
Everything till now has been nothing more than a dress rehearsal to an empty audience...I am practice perfect,... match fit, and ready to feature in a world of our own.
I'll make you breathe like a new born child, and hold your hand
till our fingers~print.
I don't know how to dance but i can offer you the slowest of hugs
across any crowded room....................................So don't be afraid,
Im good with numbers, and I promise...i'll make every second count.

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On Friday September 19th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

finally...i found it! that heartbeat of a dance. . . mmmmmm sweet jane.

On Tuesday July 22nd, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

......i dont know why i havent bookmarked this, except that i dont need to; its etched on my bones by now...........

On Saturday June 28th, 2008, Aleas (246) writes:

Point, set, match. I nearly missed this one. It is nothing short of genuine in the way you come across, in the way you write. Not a single droplet forced, no syllable skewered or altered to give it a better flow. It *is*, and just *is*, and all that will *be* or should *be*.

On Thursday June 26th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:

I almost also melted. The ending was realy real to me, i mean the poem made it happen. visualy

On Thursday June 26th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

"breathe like a new born child, and hold your hand till our fingers~print".... [do you know how good you are?]........and that dancing reference just made me into a sillygirl...how the world stops when in the right arms. she better take your hand and not let anyone else cut in. ever. beautifully rendered thing.

On Thursday June 26th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:

....bless me; i confess...ive come back to this three times already. .. the whispersoftness of it, the self.assuredness of your voice, the startling sway of plays on words like s.word.tips gently pressed on skin. . ..so hypnotic....but still, there is something beyond that. .. something inherently noble. immensely drawn and detailed with devoutness. something that makes a girl feel very feminine. . ... .. .. .......... . .you get a dragonfly }{----

On Thursday June 26th, 2008, Narcissa (727) writes:

I ~melted~ in that last sentence...

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