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Physically your no challenge~my domination~to your advantage.
Crucifixed to the wall, suspended between the roll back
in your eyes and the prayer that holds you there.
The nails on this occasion.....to my advantage,
your detail for blood is exquisite, carving religious stigmata
in exchange for this pound of flesh.
Slow motion fury in the name of epithymia, don't forget to ex-hale....
I only exist when you think of me.
 



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On Tuesday July 22nd, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:
"your detail for blood is exquisite, carving religious stigmata in exchange for this pound of flesh"....the reverb in this is sinfully delightful; as a 'wannabe' sculptor, the words you chose... the effort, the rhythms it takes to carve that image, the use of hands and exquisitely slow.grinding time it takes to bring it forth. ..it DOES take 'blood', sweat and tears [pounds of flesh wrought and iron.tasting] . that word 'carving'....and to tie it in so deftly, so [once again] dangerously within a spiritual/sexual/lusting context. . .whatever is at this core. . .. is un.mercifully transcendant and tempting. . . .i'll take a dream of this to go, please?


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, palenoble (63) writes:
left me quite speechless. esp. the ending. well done...


On Tuesday May 20th, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (545) writes:
this becomes one with my existance, then leaves for a cigarret break, the whispers my name, and once again silence -symph-


On Tuesday May 20th, 2008, Narcissa (727) writes:
*exhales*...Damn...


On Tuesday May 20th, 2008, saintedmad (1154) writes:
somewhere between the sacred and the profane you found a deity. ..it seems. nessa


On Tuesday May 20th, 2008, An Expired Member (5) writes:
nice one..


On Tuesday May 20th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
the ending was a mind bender. I find poetry like this, inspirering to my pen. *writes up new material*



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